Comments - If I could.

June ( F P C ) at 2007-06-18

Allow me to start by saying welcome back ,great to log on and see that you have posted a write ,and I must say you have not lost you touch ,its done so beautifully.I loved it from start to finish.Good to see you back ,hope you are well ,take care.

Darlene at 2007-06-18

Very well written. I enjoyed this piece very much.

Dora ( F C ) at 2007-06-20

Havent read ur work in ages. great poem. very moving. xx

SedaxChase ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-21

Awww, this was very wonderful poetry & the passion in this is just beautiful. Oh, something else too, I don't know if you remember me but I'm Sedusha, and I hope this is bert that I used to talk to. I'm just not sure. =P Hope your well! Well, keep it up & God Bless!

Lovez~ Sedusha~

Luanne ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-22

This is something you'll never be without,
Whether you are near or far,
For it is a simple but precious gift...
My love is where you are.
^^^^
A beautifully ending stanza Bert . The entire poem just makes me want to smile for it's beauty is breath-taking.

Wonderful !
Your new name change threw me for a moment ...
Take care dear heart
Luanne

Marian ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-23

I adore this piece. It was, in fact, written and presented rather well and sound. The overall diction and flow of words were terrific. As a result, on the whole, I give you my props for writing such a fantastic love poem. Regards. =]

Genna ( F C ) at 2007-06-23

Great Poem! Keep it up. 5/5

Tiffany ( C ) at 2007-06-23

Absolutely beautiful....This is honestly what every girl dreams to hear=) I found myself smiling and sighing at the end of the poem...because it is just that darn beautiful!!! great job and you have a gift with words!!!!

Twisted Heart ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-23

Hey Bert,

lovely sentiments, my friend.

"I'd give you everything you'd want,
Or you could ever need,
But that would never measure,
All you've given me."

Just lovely.

Always,
Jeannie

Jimmysgirl at 2007-06-24

This is excellent!!! I love this poem u wrote. U should check out some of mine.

Tigger at 2007-06-24

This is beautiful i love it ...5/5

The Lonely Rose ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-24

Awwwwwwww.....lol this poem is soo awesome! just makes me go all smiley and wishes tht someone would say do tht 4 me...a 5/5!

Rachel ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-24

Althoough the flow was off a bit in stanza 5, the poem was absolutely beautiful. What a romantic piece for that special someone. Nice job.

Nema SaeeD 3 ( F C D ) at 2007-06-25

Ok,honestly...This is incredibly AMAIZINGGGG!!!!!

But, I am not a rich man,
Nor lucky enough to catch a star,
I can only give you one thing...
All that's in my heart.

this stanza absolutely ROCKED!!!!
I love the poem So much its full of true meanings & love =)...Idk its just so inspiring, your choice of wrods was awesome!

wonderful work =)
keep it up
NemO xx

skye16 ( P D ) at 2007-06-25

One word "beautiful"

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-30

What a beautiful poem of love. The emotions you have portrayed in this piece are wonderful.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

Mousie ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-01

Aww that's so sweet and adorable, you really made the poem cute and homey and loveable. great write once again

SlaveToTheMusic ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-02

This was really sweet and cute. I truely find your love poems to be amazing. The emotion you portrayed is unique. I really did adore reading this piece. Such warmth. Flow, and word choice were spot on. Again I couldn't find a flaw throughout this. Well done~mel

Bea ( C D ) at 2007-07-02

Wow, <3 I have to say this is flawless writing, Wonderful job. 5/5

gIrL ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-07

I really reallyy really loved ur poem n am gona add u to my fav
keep it up :)


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