Comments - Have you ever

Marc Ortiz ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-22

Aww.. It was really good. Simple but beautiful just like love. You're reall in love man. I adore the emotions in it, keep it up. Flow was smooth.

thinking of how lucky
you are
to have this angel
^We have the same style in writing xD

Just a suggestion to use punctuations :) because a poem without a punctuation is like a song without a tune.

anyway overall 5/5!

livin in a lonely hell ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-22

Its not corney i like a lot it seems like alot depth was put in it or feeling great job 5/5

Ladie S aka Sydney ( D ) at 2007-06-22

That was so cute! I loved it! 5/5

katy ( F P C ) at 2007-06-22

I love this poem can really relate to all of it, i feel it all the time with my bf, SSOOO GOOD! xx

Alissa ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-22

I really liked this poem,
it really explained what loving someone is like.
You showed your talent and you're flow was spotless.
Amazing, great job.
And I agree with Marc,
punctuations would really add the cherry to the icream.;)

The Lonely Rose ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-24

Awww..this poem is so sweet and it makes me wnt a bf even more lol the poem was good but mayb help wit the flow though but it wuz good and it made me smile

Lozbi ( F C D ) at 2007-06-24

Awww how sweet
well done
5/5
.x

Danny ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-30

I love my girl like that every second of the day lol its not corny if you mean it!

M Douglas Hoss ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-07

A nice free free verse poem. a bit lengthy but nice.

June ( F P C ) at 2007-07-11

That is so beautiful ,and yes I do love someone that much but unfortunantly i know I will never be with that someone.Very well done on such an excellent write.

Amberr ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-31

Awww, and yes I am loving like this right now.
This poem was a beautiful dedication.
I loved the way you had it setup, and I was quite captivated by your words. So much emotion, and although there wasn't a consistant flow the peice was just beautiful :)
Great job!
5/5
((Amber))

Fsams ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-01

Wow you are superb I would say, you must continue writing love poems. The whole poem is cohesive and the words nicely strung each other. All positive points :)

5/5 all the way

Fsams

XxSara BethxX ( F C D ) at 2007-08-02

Awww..
How Sweet..
Great Job =]]

AlesiA Professional Freak ( F P C ) at 2007-08-30

What a beautiful dedication. There's nothing wrong with a little corny. I thought it was very sweet. The look of this poem was interesting, I found I had to read it really fast because I didn't know where to stop and when start, but it's not such a bad thing. It's almost like when thoughts race around your head and your pen wont move fast enough, not to mention that it's like a racing heart. So, it was a very cool poem.

Alesia <3

me just you ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-21

Aw that was adorable...i didn't think it was corney at all : ) i loved it 5/5 <33