Andrea Sunny ( F P C D )
at 2007-07-09
Britt...This is so dang beautiful.....awesome piece......
Jenni Marie ( F P C D )
at 2007-07-10
OH HOLY ****
I frikken love this...this is just...gosh.
This is AWESOME.
Beautiful and moving and the imagery you portrayed was boootiful, blew me right away.
Oh my...I love it!
HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-20
Well shucks, this time I couldn`t choose the lines lol. Your imagery in this poem is just perfect fitted for the wording, I`m jealous of your talent :[ lol. I don`t know how you do it, your work is always unique; never cliched...I love it lol.
5.5
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Skyler Skateboarding ( F P C D )
at 2007-10-04
Seduction paired; infinite glow
Desires to find their blazing sun
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I love these lines. I love how you had 'glow' and 'sun'. This poem is written amazingly. Keep it up 5/5
Prophecies In Kodak ( F P C D )
at 2007-10-18
Like clock work, they meet again.
Let me tell you, this deserves capitals.. so bear with me; BRILLIANT!
That line has me grinning ear to ear. I normally do not go for short poems.. but you have a way or really keeping me into them. Especially when throwing lines like that out at me. This, again, was flawless, damnit.
I'm jealous.
Robert ( F P C D )
at 2007-10-22
There was a lot of real good images in this pice but little to hold it all together or wrap it up to one thought. I guess I think it was lacking a message but great vocab and description Plot121
The Queen of Spades ( F P C D )
at 2007-10-27
What a beautiful poem! I'm always astounded by your work because you have such a talent for imagery and putting a picture in the readers' head. A lovely piece!
smiles for alex ( F P C D )
at 2007-10-29
The 'Twinkling Sky' set a whoooooole image for your reader, i really loved the soft approach you took to this making it pure and easy xxx alex xxx
Taylor ( F C )
at 2007-11-08
WOW this is beautiful.
really good imagery.
I loved it!!!!!
5/5
keep up the good work
debbylyn ( F P C D )
at 2007-11-09
Beautiful and ethereal.....I love the images of love and the cosmos! Many fresh metaphors....I've enjoyed the read! Take care, Debbie
mOnStRiiToS pRiiNcEsS ( F P C D )
at 2007-11-10
Short, simple, and sweet. I loved the passion on this poem. This one is definately going to my favs.
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Midnight Sun ( F P C D )
at 2007-11-17
Amazing title on this poem....seriously, it drew me in immediately. And you made a nice transition into the poem from the title. It kept my attention and had beautiful imagry. Great job! :)
~Midnigh Sun
Italian Stallion ( F P C D )
at 2007-11-21
Wow, first off I must excellent write. The grammer and choice of words in this poem was outstandingly done. The flow and the structure was good. Although I felt this write could've been a bit longer, it was nicely portraited and well done. You have a lot of talent my dear, keep up the amazing writes.
Peace, Joe
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