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kayla at 2007-07-13

This poem is really sweet=) it reminds me of my feelings 4 sum1 keep up tha good work!

Karissa ( F P C ) at 2007-07-13

Aw. I love that poem. Its so sweet and I love it =]] Loves.

Karissa ( F P C ) at 2007-07-15

So what did you have in mind when you wrote this poem? Message.

WiNgS Of StEeL ( F C ) at 2007-07-27

Gr8 poem..short and simple and full of love:d
kep up the gr8 writes
tk care now:D
bree

jes at 2007-08-25

Omg i love that poem i cant belive that you wrote that you are really GREAT!!!!! at writign poems. man i hope that i can get that good.

Alicja B ( C ) at 2007-09-07

Aw thats such a cute and good poem!
please check out mine
it's called
A Graceful Swan
thanks :)

sarah kate ( P C ) at 2007-11-17

Beautiful =) loved it
very sweet 5/5

Kasia ( F C ) at 2008-01-02

Thhis poem is soooo good 5/5 kasia

checkerflames at 2008-01-05

That was real sweet hard 2 find guys like that any more,keep it up!!!!

shayla marie ( D ) at 2008-01-07

AWWW...this is one of the sweetest poems that i have heard! i love it! you are going on my "favorite Authors" list! you have talent there!...can you please return the favor? I am new to this site...
THANKS!
~shayla~

megan at 2008-02-19

Hey thts really cool i like it. short and sweet, just like a good kiss, and really tender. it reminds me of wha im not worth but oh well. megz

me just you ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-24

Aww...thats so sad...but very deep i love this poem hunn great job 5/5 <33

leah ( C ) at 2008-03-16

Aww...this is really nice. and sweet. some girl is going to be very lucky to meet you.

Britt ( C ) at 2008-04-07

Aww...
this is a really good poem
i like it
keep it up!

XOXOXO
Britt

miracle ( F P C ) at 2008-04-13

I love this

Mr Darcy ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-27

A clever little piece. I like the way you explain the motives of he first stanza in the second, only to create sorry in the third with a lovers self-doubt!

A good write.

Michael

waiting 4 some1 ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-28

"But the kiss to no one special
Just a fragile little heart
I pretend that I don't love you
So I don't get ripped apart "

well done

Brianne at 2008-04-28

Wow that's really amazing!!

love never wanted me at 2008-05-05

This poem is so cute.

i already love your work lol

Elizabeth at 2008-05-09

Awww that is sooo sweet That was one of the most beautiful poems ever! =)


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