xXxXxBroken BeautyxXxXx ( C )
at 2007-08-02
Great Poem!!! I love the ending! If you get a chance, please check out some of my work!
Hidden Kiss ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-02
I also love this poem. But I think some lines are abit random, dont flow onto the next sentence very well and some grammar is a bit wrong.....but I can agree with this, I can easily connect with what you are saying....but how do you know that the love won't fade?? can you just tell? 0_0
=p awsum!!!!
<3 xox
Dont Hassle The Hoff ( C D )
at 2007-08-09
I liked this poem! :) I also enjoyed the ending with the 3 dots but some of your grammar needs work. Other than that I thought this poem was a good emotional piece.
--Lindsay.
Staying Away ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-14
Aww sweet. i like it a lot. youve done a great job on this. the emotions and feelings were nice. keep up the good work.
thanks for the comment on my poem.
dAnCe4aDrEaM ( F C )
at 2007-08-16
OOOH MY GOSH i love this one! it totally reminds me of my boyfriend, quentin:)
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