Finalgravedigger ( F P C D )
at 2007-07-22
Wow very unique loved the style 4.5 that rounds up to a 5 lol
NyellMoonlight ( F P C D )
at 2007-07-24
Wow, this piece has so powerful imagery, and the emotions are excellently described. I like it from the beginning to the end, every stanza is greatly written. The fourth stanza is my favorite.
5/5 from me.
Tracy D Rollings ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-10
WOW that was very powerful and it blew my mind ,great poem, emotions running wild here , you mastered the weather channel wonderfully written , and wording , wow that was awesome , great job,,,, your friend Tracy d,,,,,, 5/5
[ Praised by : Sher ]
Lonely Little Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-29
Loved this one a lot too. It was definitely unique on how you used the weather metaphors describe heartache and I love the last stanza. I wrote something similar to this using weather as metaphors for something totally different. Its fun. Keep up the great work. Writing is definitely one of your skills.
Christina Yap ( C )
at 2007-08-31
:-( I CAN RELATE! 5/5 Beautiful explanation. Even if one hasn't felt that way, they can understand
waiting 4 some1 ( F P C D )
at 2008-03-12
Wow, such a poem. wonderful choice of words i loved your poem indeed and how expressed your feelings out there
no wonder you have the popularity
Tom Swart ( F P C )
at 2008-04-05
Wow-I can feel the mist of those falling tears and think your free verse is great. I love it. Your emotions really shine here and the feelings that propel them selves into the reader are overwhelming. Thanks
Italian Stallion ( F P C D )
at 2009-02-08
Wonderful heartfelt write, I fully enjoyed reading this poem. I loved your choice of words, everything was flawless except for puncuation, I didn't see any puncuation anywhere. The flow and structre were both good as well. Overall a great write, keep it up!
Peace, Joe
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