Edwin a man apart ( F P C D )
Wow excellent excellent another 5/5:)
On Cupids Bad Side ( F C )
Such a beautiful poem, I loved it and I agree with every word. Not to mention how nicely it flowed and rhymed.. Great poem altogether. 5/5 dearest!!
AngelOfTheLights ( F P C D )
I really love it a lot. It is so true.
Marc Ortiz ( F P C D )
Woah.. You must be religious xD I think your name 'Angel' really does fits you =)
Anyway this was once again.. Another fine written piece about God. I really like the opening stanza.. it really grabs the reader's attention, well done!
You're really good at writing this kind of poem. I think you should write more about God.. I believe that someday you can inspire many people to believe in him.
The was really good!
im not totally religeous
but that was great