Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2007-07-23
Debbie
What a breathtaking Sonnet. Your words of love are stunning.
Your sweet caress my empty arms denied
Longing words fall to silent lonely cries
A poet's verse to quell the ebbing tide
Through lips bereft of whispered breaths and sighs
How I relate to this verse. Touches me heart so deeply.
~CLAP~CLAP~CLAP~
Love Cindy
M Douglas Hoss ( F P C D )
at 2007-07-23
That's just beautiful....
Twisted Heart ( F P C D )
at 2007-07-23
Deb,
What a beautiful sonnet. loved the word usage. Especially loved this stanza:
"Oh Love! beseech the night's divine intent
One last bequest of morning's perfect smile
Against thy breast a beating heart content
Embracing gentle comfort for a while"
Absolutely breathtaking. The imagery and flow was excellent.
Bravo, dear friend.
Always,
Jeannie
Barry ( F C )
at 2007-07-24
Poem speaks and plays melodies .........
stunningly beautiful.....
I wish i could find words to compliment what you have written.... mmmmmmmmmm
Poetess Call Me GlenDuh ( F C D )
at 2007-07-24
This is amazing. A truly beautiful, sincere and honest love poem. I've tried sonnets before, but yours is just incomparable. I'm at a loss for words. This is by far one of my favourite love poems on the site. Never stop writing. 5/5
` Liz =]
Marian ( F P C D )
at 2007-07-24
Wow! I was in awe reading this sonnet. It's absolutely beautiful. It was such a stunning success, Miss Debbie. For a moment, I was carried away by your words to another heavenly realm [of thought]. That's how breathtaking and compelling your words are. I hope you keep on writing what you feel and like. All the best and take care. Love, Debbie
BlueDreams ( F P C D )
at 2007-07-25
What a poems...My pleasure to read this Marvellous sonnet.. yet within Beautiful emotions penned you portrait here, one of beautiful sonnet i have read..... Well done!
"Longing words fall to silent lonely cries
A poet's verse to quell the ebbing tide"
Rachel ( F P C D )
at 2007-07-25
I didn't mean to put an a in the above comment. I also wanted to add that I love the ending of the piece. Nice way to finish it off!
Barry ( F C )
at 2007-07-26
Perfect, absolutely breathtaking,amazing,
captivating........special beyond words......
as for the ending......well.......
You can find a dream and live it....
As for the poem?
The one that will run on and on.....
Very beautiful....beyond any words
audrey harris ( F C )
at 2007-07-27
Wow, wonderful poem! Meaningful, too. 5/5
chavii ( F C D )
at 2007-07-28
Amazing beauty this poem holds.Very heartfelt and deeply moving descriptions.Great poem .
Best Wishes
chavii.
Fsams ( F P C D )
at 2007-07-28
Debb your poem is flawless. You describe things in such a way the saliva oozes out for a while ;). The word choice is as always outstanding. God bless you dear
Tc
Fsams
Arun Khan ( F P C )
at 2007-07-29
You proably already know it.. this is brilliant.. Very amazing.. must say the way you play with words is infatuating..
ben thompson ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-04
Very nice. beautiful words. 5/5
Deana ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-04
I love sonnets,someday I`ve got to try one,this was superb,If I could do half this good I`d be happy. very touching.
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-06
What a way to tell someone you love and miss them. I'm running out of adjectives for your work, Debbylyn. Amazing. Billy Rob
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