Comments - Remain miles apart.

June ( F P C ) at 2007-08-02

What a beautifully written piece ,moved me from start to finish ,but then thats no surprise as all your writes touch me in some way or another.This was the verse that touched me the most.....

But my love for her is so deep
it even robs me of sleep
I am in so much emotional pain
maybe a balde deep into a vein.

It touched me because I love someone so much ,I can't sleep and I have to feel so musch hurt cos I can 't be with him that yes at times I have wondered if it would just be easier to take the easy way out.But I do not have the strength to take such drastic action for I have my kids and they they are my reason for waking up each day.

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-03

Bert
What a gut wrenching piece you have penned. The pain, dispair, and heartache cry from everyword.

Time to allow myself to grow old
forever staying alone and cold
I've said my piece, I'll say no more
I'll just curl up here and die on the floor.

I have felt this so many times....Yet the good Lord always shows me reasons to go on. Wonderful poem full of intense and deep feelings. You are always in my thoughts and prayers.
Take Care Cindy

Wake ( F P C ) at 2007-08-03

Hmm.. Damn Sad.. but Damn Lovely .. brilliant piece of work..
Loved IT!!


~Wake~

Shay at 2007-08-03

This poem is wondeful !

joseph at 2007-08-05

Damn i felt exactly like this about a girl. this is honestly the best poem i have ever read.

Mr M ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-05

I just love the way you write. You see so clearly within yourself. Well done.

Willow ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-05

A very emotional piece.... love hurts, but thats the price we pay when we fall hard for someone. But then we pick up the pieces and move on with our lives, as will you.... peace, love and happiness to you my dear friend.

♥shyann♥ ( F P C ) at 2007-08-06

Excellent!! 5/5

MizzCici ( C ) at 2007-08-06

Diz rite here is my top favorite i love it, you put alot of feelin and emotions to it,u must have really loved her, dat was very very beautiful,i love it, it almost made me cry.....lol
really love it,keep da good work up...........

schylar at 2007-08-07

This poem is absolutly amazing. i loved it. i can honestly relate to it. so great work!!! ~schylar~

lumbete at 2007-08-08

This awesome an in the same situation your poem hit home

VampireCaitlyn ( F P ) at 2007-08-08

I loved it, can fele the emotions pouring off if it

2BEEZIE4U ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-09

Very great writting... keep it up
50/50

jose at 2007-08-09

Good work i wonder how you did it great creativity keep it up,so touching and it touched me indeed

Ian ( F C ) at 2010-06-02

That all was so well written together.

nafeel at 2011-06-20

This poem is so deep that it brought back memories for me :D

Max ( F C D ) at 2012-04-16

Gr8 piece btw just read the 11th time haha =P
5/5 i already gave that vote