angela ( F C D )
at 2007-08-02
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
i just fell in love with the frickin poem!
such good story. .writting, style, rhyming.. everything.. its going in my favorites
5/5!!!
<3ang
twisted reality ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-03
Awww it was so cute. But personally, I think it should go in the love poems or maybe the ones about life. It doesn't quite fit in with the funny poems.
The flow was good, although in a few places I think it could be rearranged so that it flows better in some spots. In a couple places, it seems a bit forced. The rhymes were ok. Nothing fantastic, but nothing utterly horrible.
As for the story line, it was cuute lol. First love at the age of 9 XD Woow. lmao. And I hope you find that one guy that makes your heart soar =) 5/5 xoxo
Samantha
Br0KeN aNgEL ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-03
Awww!!!!
This was so cute, kinda sad in the begining but it turned out so nicely!!!! I hope you'll find your purfect guy soon!! this was an amazing poem!!! i loved it!!!keep it up ok!!!
5/5 =D
oh would you plz check out some of my poems and tell me what you think? thanx
~angel~
bridgit
at 2007-08-04
That is the cutest poem ever.
Robert Dean
at 2007-08-05
This poem is reall good i feel u
Nunny
at 2007-08-05
Awww, a real cute poem, loved it! ... as they say dont go searching for love, love will come searching for u =)
5/5
ღWordsღHurtღ ( F C D )
at 2007-08-08
Awwwwwwwww
Such a cute poem ! =)
The Flow, the rhyme, was good =]
Well Written
and VERY cute !
Keep Smiling xx
yoyi
at 2007-08-09
Aww so cute i really like this poem keep the good work :P
missin him ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-16
Aww! that was an adorable poem! i loved it : ) keep it up girly!
<3 tabi
*Charisma* ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-20
Love the positive ending! I think it's kind of cute how you tell the stages of your love....and it shows how we heal and move on. Nice piece!
Really lovin' your work!
Charisma*
Raven
at 2007-08-21
OMG.i loove this song
i ve seriosuly love it
THis is a really good one
5/5
♥Mz.Raven
Luzan and Nazeer ( F C )
at 2007-08-25
Its an excellent piece, well written.. 5/5
Nazeer
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