Comments - Hold my hand

DoubleEdgedSword ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-29

A great expression of your feeling. This was a warm and heartfelt piece.. great job

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-09-03

What a wonderful piece.

I will be here for you always and forever
don't ask me to leave for I will forsake you never

I have had these feelings.
Excellent!
Take Care Cindy

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-09-03

What a wonderful piece.

I will be here for you always and forever
don't ask me to leave for I will forsake you never

I have had these feelings.
Excellent!
Take Care Cindy

Kenneth ( F P C ) at 2007-09-06

Very good i really like this poem shows alot of love =)

Dustin Hartzell at 2007-09-23

This has so many simularities to how I feel when I have fallen for a girl and im glad that you are someone that can take that feeling and put it into words...

Devon ( F C ) at 2007-09-30

Beautifully made, i love it

kIROS DELA VEGA ( P C ) at 2007-10-01

5/5 for you... coz you melt my feelings using your wonderful poem.. keep up

Italian Stallion ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-17

Very beautiful write. Short and to the point, I'm sure a lot can relate to this, great job!

Peace, Joe

Pete ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-18

If the ending is a metaphor, then its a beautiful poem .. expressing beautiful emotion and wonderful sentiment about a loved one moving onwards and upwards to bigger and better things.

If it isn't a metaphor, I'd be a little worried that you had an eagle in captivity. (^^ ,)

I think this is a really nice poem to read. Its short and direct uses nice imagery and has a wonderful ending.

Good work.
[5/5]
~Pete.

Tainted777Slitta at 2007-11-05

Hi Ingrid, this is a lovely poem u have written, very heartfelt and expressive, u are lucky to have been able to feel whet u have written... 5/5

Birgit ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-18

Nice poem =] The flow was nice =)
"So go out now, into the world....
spread your golden wings and fly"
This stanza really changes it into a different kind of love poem.. but I liked it anyway!
5/5
x

Rachel ( F P C D ) at 2007-12-30

Full of emotion. It is so sad to lose a loved one. You have done a nice job expressing these fellings.

David ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-22

17 others love this poem and rate it exellent, i do the same :) it truly was excellent.

5/5 david

Jo Anna EL ( F P C ) at 2008-03-09

Wow the emtion of this poem really came out.they way you showed how you knew youd be together and how you cared really makes it flow.i liked it keep writing!

~Jo Anna EL 5/5

Aureus Argentum ( F C D ) at 2008-07-11

There are tremendous and beautiful things in this world, Ingrid. A thousand days in the dark before the dawn; a thousand tears after the drought is done, or a rainbow of more than my inspirations; every clairvoyance I have ever dreamt or thought of: are these not the miracles of life, if so you can believe?
No. Perhaps not.
I am one to believe, though. As must other poets like me, for beauty lies everywhere we look... can be seen, heard, the smell of autumn. :)
It's so hard to describe... yet... to reel from the expectations of something we've not yet experienced can be a terrifying event.
The dark terminus of life on this Earth can seem more powerful than the day life even began to emerge from the hollows. :)

I loved this poem, Ingrid. It is as beautiful as it is inspiring. I've yet to know of such things to a more higher degree, but I've experienced it well enough to know it exists. :) Thank you!

5/5

Bri~

Composed Catastrophe ( F P C D ) at 2008-08-25

My love for you is eternal and everlasting
meeting you I consider to be my greatest blessing
^^^ i absolutely love the wording here!!! : ) it was so cute and deep great great job
5/5

Composed Catastrophe ( F P C D ) at 2008-09-10

Aww very very cute : ) i hope you let the guy you wrote this about read it he would absolutely melt
I liked how it wasn't a traditional love poem you changed it up a bit by the way you described your love
5/5

Rey at 2009-09-15

Great poem, but the best part was the comment that said you had an eagle in captivity hahaha priceless... great work though really enjoyed reading it.

mandy ( F C D ) at 2010-06-26

A sweet poem, almost mischievous. 5/5

mandy :)

Broken Wing ( F P C D ) at 2010-07-30

:) this is as sweeeeeeeet as uuuuu areeeeeeee.....loved it so much...5/5 and ya well am not a guy but lolz il never let go as i never have let u :P :)


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