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Sherry Lynn ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-30

As I told you earlier.. I think this is marvelous. You have so much talent and it shows.

To be honest, I cannot even find my favorite part because it is all excellent and written so tenderly.

Another awesome job sweetie...

--Sher

Sams Number 1 Fan ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-30

Great poem Leaderman, it kept my attention throughout, filled with alot of greatly expressed emotion that is very relatable. Flowed very nicely and straying from a single form added to its beauty. Definitely a 5

XxsilencedxX at 2007-08-30

Great poem, It flows so nicely and the name fits it perfect, I can relate to that poem in every way even in the part
"I googled your name, just to rid of this pain,
but I kept pressing next, searching on every page."
again Great Job ^_^ 5/5

Adele ( F C D ) at 2007-08-31

This poem is amazing every word is necessary and every word brings something to the poem. 5/5

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