*Charisma* ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-31
Nice job and a nice twist....you think it's gonna be a sweet poem, than you totally talk about his bad side...Good job!
Charisma*
isabel ( F P C D )
at 2007-09-01
This is really a good one...=)
and i must agree with you, as any woman will say, men are all the same...
the poem shows a good deal of anger, in my opinion...and i find that really good...("angry poems" are like 2 in one, you release anger and you get an awesome poem...;) )
anyway
you're a really nice writer
keep going
*isabel*
Crystal Gaze ( F P C D )
at 2007-09-01
Not all men are the same, just the immature one's.It takes a few heartbreak's and being played before you find the one that would never do something so awful..
You just got too learn not too fall for there game's..
And as you portrayed in the poem you have.
A good read,
Much enjoyed.
Elaine.
P.S Hold on to hope hun, you special one will come:)
Steph x0x0x ( F P C D )
at 2007-09-01
Keep looking, you'll find the right guy eventually. They're not all the same... Lol.
The flow was flawless & the word usage was good.
"It's hard to believe I once thought you were nice
All the sugar and sweets without any spice"
^ My favorite lines... very creative. 5.5 Lovely job.
- Stephanie Lynn .+.
NothingBreaksMeLikeYouDo ( F C )
at 2007-09-02
Wow really great poem
:) absolutely love it
and you're so right
they're all the same , i always thought that one person was different but it turns out he's not
argh ; well good job ! ;)
Sarah
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jennifer leigh
at 2007-09-02
That was great
i went through the exact same thing
only i was too dumb to realise that they were all the same
but keep holding on
the right guy will be there waiting for you
xxx
Jacqui Armstrong ( F P C D )
at 2007-09-20
Great poem i can really relate! and let me assure u there are a few guys out there... who dont just wanna play u!
the poem has such great flow and rhyme. loved the way it pulled me in to read more!
Well done!
Love
Jacs
xxxx
[[GLAMOROUS__x]]
at 2009-11-11
Excellent poem, I can totally relate to it.
Boys are scum.
All they do is lie, cheat and so on.
Fair enough, there may be a few exceptions and I mean a FEW lol.
I couldnt have siad it better myself girl.
You are very talented. Keep writing.
All the best.
Rachel
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