Comments - Because of You

BlueDreams ( F P C D ) at 2007-09-06

Wow, well penned Angie dear, though shortly, but well expressed emotions, oh so heartfelt penned, well done!

ChaosKiller69 at 2007-09-06

This is a really nice poem. I like it.

NyellMoonlight ( F P C D ) at 2007-09-06

Great poem. I love to read your love poems, there are always so unique and somehow special and so magical. You portrayed the emotions in this piece excellently, and the whole poem is very touching, it made me smile... It's really good to love someone so much, I'm happy for you.
Keep writing, 5/5 from me.

DarkSpirit ( F C D ) at 2007-09-07

Simply beautiful... Wording is great and emotions are expressed incredible. I enjoyed reading it, I like every line of it. You should be proud on this piece.

Bogie ( F P C D ) at 2007-09-08

The ultimate true love no doubt.
I like how you reversed the first
two lines as the last two lines,
an excellent read Willow,
Bogie

♥shyann♥ ( F P C ) at 2007-09-11

Awww i really liked how this was exspressed. You did a great job writing this i especially liked this part
"trusting comes easier
than it did before
opening my heart, soul
to love freely again
I'm not afraid
because of you"
Overall it was a beautiful poem from begginning to end 5/5:)

abby ( P ) at 2007-09-12

That was a really pretty poem...i like it alot!

5/5 i think.

-abby

Wendy at 2007-09-12

You've had many visits on this poem...i also thought it was a really nice one.

sf49 at 2007-09-13

Nice but 'be yourself' with every1 ...

Lithium ( F P C ) at 2007-09-18

Wonderful piece, and a great way to express how one person can make so much difference, well done xox lithium

Katie ( C ) at 2007-09-22

What a beautifully simple way to express your trust and faith in another human being. It is a wonderful feeling knowing that there is someone whom you can be yourself with without any pressure.
A lovely write
K xx

AutumnxBliss ( P C ) at 2007-10-09

That was truly sweet!!
^^!! I love knowing that you can be yourself in front of someone, you don't have to hide...
I wish I could do that sadly...
Great poem.
5/5

Tim Mauntler ( F P C ) at 2007-10-15

Great work

"let my true smile shine"

love that line because a smile can be something your self conscious about... when you smile for a camera it has to be perfect, but shen you're with that special someone, it doesn't matter...
love it
keep writing

mohamad aref ( F C ) at 2007-10-17

The flow of ur emotion is really unique

mohamad aref ( F C ) at 2007-10-30

Really nice and beautiful

ihrtschlepper ( C D ) at 2007-11-06

I love it, i totally understand!!!

Joshua Grider ( F C D ) at 2007-11-17

I really loved this poem.
i'm going to put it on my favs. :)
5/5 of course.
plz return the favor

JaM ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-29

Aww, this is such a sweet poem. Great work Willow.