Andrea Sunny ( F P C D )
at 2007-09-23
Amanda,
The beauty of one flower, meshing as one with another....ohhhh mercy this is an elegant and beautiful poem.....I love the ending.....
"Lessons found within the picking,
Fragrances woe selective few.
Fingertips tingle with delight,
Glowing for the bond of two."
Pretty, pretty, piece!
SlaveToTheMusic ( F P C D )
at 2007-09-23
This was such a beautifully sweet poem. So touching and elegant which you portrayed nicely. From start to finish this piece was amazing it didn't falter at all throughout the entire thing. Your way with words was superb. Well done keep up the great work. ~Mel
Andrew Morton ( F P C D )
at 2007-09-23
I love how you use the metaphor of fate having a hand, it gives it his...effectiveness that really stands out throughout the entire poem, amazing work on this, keep up the good work!
andrew
Pearl Poet
at 2007-09-23
"Overtaken by a game of patients,
The willingness to sit and wait.
A moments glance its all there,
The hand reaching out is fate."
Simply a beautiful opening, bravo!
Timothy r ( F P C D )
at 2007-09-25
As was said above, the opening was superb. This was a beautifuuly penned poem, and I was glad to read it. Timothy r
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