Twobit
at 2007-09-27
I like how you describe love in this poem. The flow is fantastic! 5/5
Miu ( F P C D )
at 2007-10-01
I think It was beautiful. Deep and had a soft sound to it. Really amazed. I don't understand how it's rating is so down. Raw emotions just aaah beautiful!
5/5 defently
ReproducedByIntelligence ( F P C D )
at 2007-10-01
Well, once again I wasn't too fond of the rhyming. BUT, it was better than the last.
I want you to know, that when I say I don't like your rhyming style I'm not 'doggin' your poetry. Your poetry is amazing, I love it. Just not the rhyming.
Plus, I'm not good at comments.
You get what I think, to a point.
I can't say what's good about it, I'm bad at that.
But, I can tell you a million things wrong with one poem.
Lol. :|
Sorry.
I'm honest though.
AblissfulDREAMER ( F C D )
at 2007-10-13
This was different and a really interesting read. I loved the ending, it was beautiful. Well done. *5/5*
I Said Forget Me Not ( F P C )
at 2007-10-14
You wrote about love in your poem,
"Love is more than romance
for there are others of significance". This part explains a lot about the meaning of love.
Gem ( F P C D )
at 2007-10-15
So cute!!
"Give love your might
and keep it all right
so there's no fright
day or night."
I loved the last stanza. Summed everything up perfectly!
Well done
5/5
*Gem*
gack60 ( F C )
at 2007-10-18
Nice work!! raw words straight from the heart
nice structure and flow
well done
5/5
Gary.
Dark Secrets ( F C D )
at 2007-10-28
Wow this is really soo beautiful.... it explains love in such a simple yet powerful way.
I guess this is the first time I've ever read one like this.
Benjamin AmbersCry ( C )
at 2007-10-30
Well Written!Worth the time!Made a fluster of emotions;exactly what a poet wants to do!5/5
Sage
at 2007-11-06
Lovely!
i like this very much!
ihrtschlepper ( C D )
at 2007-11-15
Amazing!
you have truly captured the idea of love...
5/5
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