Ill Give Blood To Your Dried Vei ( F C )
at 2007-09-29
Awe that was so sad and sweet. I loved it. Very beautifully written.
VanillaxXxLostInLies ( F P C D )
at 2007-10-07
Awww. Sad poem, lots of emotion. I really enjoyed reading this piece, keep up the great work ^_-
5/5
-Vanilla
DarkSpirit ( F C D )
at 2007-10-12
This poem would be even more better if you add some punctuation.
Anyway it is so beautiful, it has very touching rhythm and whole piece is filed with emotions. Excellently written, this piece has very special tone that is truly fantastic. You expressed your feelings on a great way, well done!
ReproducedByIntelligence ( F P C D )
at 2007-10-26
Wow.
i was looking for a poem by you that wasn't sad, i wanted to see how you worked with those, eh.
and, honestly. this is kind of sad. but, it's still amazing good. the ending, isn't sad. the rest kind of is, but not like the rest of them. [not that i don't like them. . . i love them.]
you've done a wonderful job, once again darling.
keep it up.
SlaveToTheMusic ( F P C D )
at 2007-11-17
You just need to add more punctuation to this piece like capitalizing the "I's" so that it looks much better and is easier to read. I loved the flow of this poem I found it to be much better then your other pieces and the emotion was really heartfelt. A nice poem you have here. Keep up the good work. ~Mel
ICE f0rg0tTeNph0eNix ( F P C D )
at 2008-03-16
A simple poem yet comprises a great sad and touching meaning.. it never ended like those usual poems i've read that seems to be so hopeless (yours is kindda different) keep it up.
Danielle Elyse
at 2008-03-26
Its so cute and i just love it<33
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