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Andrea Sunny ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-09

Cuddles,

This piece is beautiful....Oh mercy!!
love the repeat of the title in each stanza and the rhyme shceme and flow is very pretty...ohhhh what a sensual pretty you have created here!! love it!!

Laura ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-09

Oh la la cuddles...i really liked this stanza:
Enchanting celestial body
show me what you can do.
Plague my soul with desires-
erotic pains of wanting you.

create a sensual feeling...go girl, go girl!!

CursedLies ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-13

Great poem! There is so much of feeling and i love the title and how you repeat it in the poem. Beautiful job! 5/5
Kate

Another Marie Antoinette ( F P C ) at 2007-10-20

I really enjoyed this poem and I believe it was well penned. Great job and keep up the awesome-ness work ... Lol ...

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