Comments

Adam at 2007-10-13

Luminiscent is a nice word, very fun poem.

YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight ( F C D ) at 2007-10-14

This poem made me smile from ear to ear nice job....5/5

Luanne ( F P C D ) at 2009-05-24

Cass I really enjoyed this read. I noticed how much your writing has grown since this poem and would love to see it a re-write of this piece someday. From reading your more recent poetry and seeing the colorful and brilliant words you now use in your writing .... a re-write of this poem would create a brilliant piece I think.
Sort of "an old mixed with the new"

I also noticed a lot of filler words in this piece compared to your newer writings .... which also shows how much you have advanced in your writing.

Even with all the filler words I still loved and enjoyed reading this piece.
It made me feel "light as the air and happy" a feeling of like your title " when we let it all go"

Great read Cass !

[ Praised by : Lenore Amaya ]

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