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Emma Louise at 2007-11-04

That's simply beautiful. Very easy read, nice rhythm and rhyme. Sweet poem. Em xx

debbylyn ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-04

Glad you've posted again! I've missed your poetry.....Nice rhymes, short, sweet and sad....hope to read more soon!

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-05

Rachel
How nice to see a poem from you again. What a beautiful yet sad piece.

Warmth of hand
Tender touch
Memories, fantasies
Miss you much

This stanza really tugged at my heart. How hard it is to miss someone we love. So much pain and so many tears.
Excellent job!
Love you Cindy

[ Praised by Rachel RTVW | Approved by Sherry Lynn ]

End Of Eternity ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-05

Hey Rachel,

this is really a very beautiful poem, its so short and simple yet so meaningful and so deep. its really nice to be back on site and reading such beautiful poem after so long.

all the best and take care

Nikko McMorbid at 2007-11-05

Loved it. (-_-)

Healing Spirit tpfka Broker ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-05

Rachel,

You manage to say so much with so few words! It makes the poem very powefull...
I feel like this too, I wish I had written it,lol!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Becca ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-05

LOVED IT!

♥shyann♥ ( F P C ) at 2007-11-07

Beautiful poem!! definetly 5/5:)

ian ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-07

Simple words, such strong emotion and meaning, flowed very easily, wouldn't change a word, beautiful work, keep it up

Liv at 2007-11-08

My olny wish is to be as good as u 1 day of my life


hope u can read some of mine!<333

Ashley at 2007-11-09

Wow that was pretty amazing

Mr Trio at 2007-11-10

Amazing.
It's so simple a child could understand it, but at the same time there is a complex meaning behind it.
Very well done.

LoverOfTheRain at 2007-11-10

This is beautiful... I can tell you write straight from your heart.I loved it.

-LoverOfTheRain

hope ( F P C ) at 2007-11-11

I really enjoyed reading your poem,
with the words you used it was like you sed so much in so little
this is the first poem of your's that i have read i must say you left a great impression
i look forward to reading someothers by you
5/5
xx hope

Grace Delight at 2007-11-11

It was short and sweet. i liked it a lot =)

lovin a man behind bars at 2007-11-11

I love it.. kinda sounds like me and my man which is locked up right now that is the way i feel i just never could put it in words

me just you ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-21

Ok you want to know what i love about this poem? ill tell you lol
i love how you have to read into you can't just read the words and totally get it you made it deeper than that and i love it : ) 5/5 <3

Bradley Peter ( F P C ) at 2008-03-22

I think this piece was a little too simple, for me anyway. I don't like complicated poems, but this just didn't tell enough, I feel. As with all your piece I've read and commented on, with the exception of one, your first stanza was the best, I particularly liked the last line of the first stanza 'Miss you much'.

Brad

Lethal Prophecy ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-16

This poem was too short.Your supposed to make the reader feel the emotion of your poetry.I felt nothing.It was as if I blinked and then it was over.Nice rhyming though.