xPinkDizzyTeacupx ( F P C D )
at 2007-11-07
Oh hell yes... i love this!! this is BEAUTIFUL. the depth in this is AMAZING. such pretty imagery and wording and written with such beauty and grace. "Not realizing it truly takes to to tango" *two. but holy crap...you sure did this title justice!!
Andrea Sunny ( F P C D )
at 2007-11-08
Ohhh Snap!
ok I know thats dorky to say, but I don't care... this poem really packs a romantic punch....tossing hearts and fluffy things out the window and replacing it with a rich deep loving message.....yeah baby...this is a LOVE POEM....whoot!
Pete ( F P C D )
at 2007-11-08
Okie Dokie ... The first thing that just blasts itself off the screen is the imagery used in this piece .. Just outrageously strong. The one thing I always look for in a good poem is vivid images, this has it in abundance.
Word choice and placement is second to none, but would we really expect anything less from you?
This poem is basically the epitome of love, you find some (most) love poems are samey [it's a word] and can come across as soppy. This steered well clear of it.
~1 Word Summary~
Beautiful.
~Pete.
[ Praised by : Britt ]
mOnStRiiToS pRiiNcEsS ( F P C D )
at 2007-11-09
Very well written poem. Full of emotion. I loved this one. 5/5
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Italian Stallion ( F P C D )
at 2007-12-20
Of course, nothing ceases to amaze me with you Britt, you always have a way with the words you use to make the flow of the poem incredible. I loved this, so much emotion within such a small poem. Wonderful job my dear, keep up the great work.
Peace, Joe
rabid isolationist ( F C D )
at 2008-02-01
Im voting all your poems till you get your friggen award.
what the hell.
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