Comments - Tell Me You're Sorry With A Straight Face

Dosent know how to be perfect ( F P C ) at 2008-01-03

Great job. everything goes well together nice job. 5\5.

WilTED ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-03

That was simply a beautiful poem.
the title itself deserved a 5/5!
the flow was flawless and i loved your word choice.
i know what it's like. it happens to me alot.
it gets tiresome, so i give up. ."/

anyway. great write. 5/5.

Romantic Lover ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-04

Hey there. Happy New Year. Looks like I have a lot of catching up to do.

Great poem. I always look forward to your poems because you have an amazing expressive style.
Now to read more.

SarahDale ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-05

Simply amazing, I enjoyed reading it till the end. . just Great! great job, as usual. . keep it up. .

Gab at 2008-01-07

Nicely done,
I could've cared for better rhyming words but the emotion and tone was there.

Pretty good I'd say...

4/5

Simply Me at 2008-01-09

Very good i really enjoyed this read. the emotions are so real and so strong 5/5

mirline at 2008-01-10

I love it

fakesmile ( C ) at 2008-01-11

That is seriously one sweet poem... 5/5!!

sexyCheckers ( F P C ) at 2008-01-11

Wow; This is amazing...
5/5

sexyCheckers ( F P C ) at 2008-01-11

...Maybe shorten the title a little? (If its for a comp.)

Luanne ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-11

Seems every single day you're apologizing
Yet I'm still dubious about your words
For you can't even look me in the eyes
And enjoy it immensely when I hurt
^^^
This stanza shouts pain. And you are so correct .... apologizing with indirect eye contact just makes one want to yell at the top of their lungs .... LIAR!!! And you have expressed that word in this stanza so well.

Can't you show any compassion
Instead of only anger and distaste
Prove that once you did care for me
Apologize to me with a straight face
^^^
Gosh how I can so relate to this stanza ... when all we are looking for is a sincere apology ... an apology with a snickered face is like ... a knife carving into our heart.

I really like this read ... you paint a sad yet colorful picture.
I find the title to be a little long and gives away much about the poems content before reading it ... but if it is for a contest then that can't be helped I guess ... lol

Well done hun, looking forward to reading more
Luanne