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WilTED ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-05

A very nice poem. :] i liked the structure.
and the wording. flow was great and t'was
a beautiful poem. :] great write. 5/5.

Kayla ( F P C ) at 2008-01-05

I loved this poem! Although third stanza second line i believe you meant "too good to be true" rather then "so good to be true". I may have the wrong stanza... Very well written otherwise. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Lingered Thoughts at 2008-01-06

Dunno, maybe, hehe, my bad. well thanks!! @.@

TwistedAngel xx ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-09

"You are perfect in my eyes
What I'm saying is true
I'm longing for the day
I will be perfect for you"

love that part.
what a great poem.
xx

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