Comments - Held Back In The Memory Of Our Yesterday.

Dora ( F C ) at 2008-01-15

Hey darl. i realli liked this poem! i loved the title of it, and i love the words uve used. very powerful poem.

WilTED ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-16

A very beuatiful write. i like the structure of this poem and it was very nicely written. a very unique piece. :] your choice of words was amazing and you have a nice big vocabulary there. :] lol. the emotion and the image you created with your words was simply amazing. I love the poem; i especially favor the last stanza. 5/5.

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NyellMoonlight ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-17

Wow...
This is powerful, different from anything I've read before. Captivating, excellent poem from the beginning to the end. Every stanza holds amount of greatly expressed emotions. Original and refreshing love piece.
I can't choose my favorite part, whole poem is fantastic.
Different lengths of stanzas are very effective.

loveislife ( F P C ) at 2008-01-17

Unbelievable write! I loved it. Great work. I always love it when someone writes something so original like this...truly amazing. keep it up :)

rach ( F C ) at 2008-01-19

This is a really good poem keep up the good writing

kati ( F C D ) at 2008-01-19

I absolutely love this...this is exactly what i am going through right now

kati ( F C D ) at 2008-01-19

I absolutely love this...this is exactly what i am going through right now

soloangel ( P C ) at 2008-01-19

Hey well thats a really good but kind of depressin poem

MyEscape ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-19

It's got a very different structure to it, but it's beautiful! I really loved it. I mean, it was full of great imagery and wording so that the reader could feel what you were going through and what you were thinking.

Lines and lines of poetry are being written, only to burn them into ash,
and more and more songs are being played, only for my memories to clash.

Great lines!
*ME*

Neil Marsden ( P ) at 2008-01-20

Superb! love every single line of this fabulous piece of feeling!

Ashley at 2008-01-22

This is amazing! how long did it take you to write this? you have real talent. i can relate... going through something like this myself! excellent job =]

adrienne ( P ) at 2008-01-22

I love this poem!! You have amazing talent!! And honestly this poem helped me a lot cause Im going through the same thing!

truelyonee at 2008-01-22

Wow. this is incredible. love the use of words