Comments

AngEl Of dEAth ( P ) at 2008-01-17

Hey! nice poem, and great ending. keep it up;-)

June ( F P C ) at 2008-01-17

That left a tear in my eye ,it was just such a touching write.I hope you find what your looking for.Just be sure to keep writing for as long as you do I shall keep reading.

PhiliHotChic ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-19

Helloooooooooooooo are you there!!! lolz..jk..hmmm...keep up the faith jas...in time u'll find her..i wish the best for you..and its a lovely poem...as always..