The Blah Sisters ( F P C )
at 2008-01-24
I love this piece, it's beautiful but also very deep and sad. I can really relate to it since it's what I feel for a certain person aswell.
Absolutely wonderful, please keep writing! You're one of my favourite writers!
Lizzy,
xxxxxx
Lace ( F P C D )
at 2008-01-25
Wow. breathtaking. i can tell that he is your everything.
i too have someone like this.
the flow of this was stunning.
the rhyming, PERFECT
"He's what keeps me alive
And what drives me insane
He's the cure to my sickness
And the cause of my pain"
Amazing. you should make it a quote!
5/5
Read your post.
could you please do my new poem
"Dear Sarah"
id really appreciate it.
thank you
take care
5/5
nobody truly knows me ( F P C D )
at 2008-01-25
Omg this is wonderful. i loved it. the contradictions were well written into the poem. i can kinda relate to this. excellent job, 5/5.
UnToLd TrUtH ( F C D )
at 2008-01-25
For not being able to write anything for awhile you did a fantastic job. I loved your rhyming and the flow. I totally understood everything you were saying. I had to read a few more times it was that good. =]
Infernus
at 2008-01-25
Very good, great flow and word usage. 5/5
gwynnedolynskie
at 2008-01-25
Omg i love this poem! you are very talented!
5/5!!!
-abby
Gabrielle ( C D )
at 2008-04-15
Very well written! I love the whole meaning to the poem I can really relate. Keep up the great work 5/5
XxXYour Greatest AddictionXxX ( D )
at 2008-05-19
WOW...This is amazing. And I can totally relate considering i feel the same way about my ex..
~₣ading |nspiration~ ( F P C D )
at 2008-06-10
Nice, it flows so well, nightmare, interesting twist...=)
MissMana ( P )
at 2009-03-11
Wow amazing..i luv your poems..they are always soo good...your poems just always flow..and this one i like cuz i can relate..well i could prolly relate to a lot of yours but this i decided to write on...lol...its just what happens to me in a relationship...i cant have a perfect relationship with anyone...maybe its me or maybe it them...either i love keep writing..:P..S.M.I.L.E
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