Comments - Cupid's little arrow

AblissfulDREAMER ( F C D ) at 2008-02-04

Ahhh I just loveddd thiss! Has to be the best work I have read by you. I could tell you poured your whole heart into this and I could really feel it because I have experianced the same thing ..

I was hooked from the first line because I truly knew the feeling you were expressing. Overall the language you used throughout the poem just blew me away with its imagery and passionate power. Wow I still can't get over how nicely this matches with what I went through ...

That ending was just perfect and it flowed flawlessly. I couldnt find anything wrong with this poem .. has to be one of the best I have read in a while.

A well deserved *5/5* from me.

David ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-04

Now this is an awesome poem, and it is coming up to valentines day too. well done, i am very proud of you.

5/5 David

FridusBlueheaven ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-04

Very unique title and simply amazing poem. Very well worded and loved the rhyme scheme very much. Everything just flawless. My favorite part was the last stanza. Definitely 5/5.

NyellMoonlight ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-04

Wow... I love this from the beginning to the end. It is so touching, filled with amount of amazingly expressed emotions. Wonderful piece very intense and beautiful. I like the imagery that you created, and the flow is excellent in every stanza. I can't choose my favorite part, every stanza is so breathtaking.
Keep up!

HiiSxBaBY ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-04

Questioning if the angels in Heaven miss you yet.
^ I absolutly love love love j'adore this line.
Well I have to say this was beyond words adorable the flow was beatifully and the rhyming fit well and the whole poem was just wonderful! I loved ittt!!! Keep up the amazing work.
5/5
<3Tay

Stephanie x3 ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-05

Awww.
I have like this huge idiotic smile on my face - Haha. This was so beautiful, it truly was. It had passion, and love was just flowing out of every single word. The emotions were strong, and the flow was flawless.

"Longing puckering lips smile in your direction,
It seems as though this love is a horrible infection,
Blushing red cheeks turn brighter as you come in sight,
The urge to kiss you here and now is a feeling hard to fight."

^^ I adore this stanza. Beautiful job, m'dear. :]] Overall: 5.5

coolest loser ever ( F C D ) at 2008-02-05

That was cute. i like like the last two lines and how they tie the entire poem together. it worked out beautifully. and if you dont mind, i would like to read this to a special someone on valintines day, yeah its that good.
5/5 !props!

Ryuu ( F ) at 2008-02-05

That poem I don't know how to explain it exactly it put the feeling across very well it's as if I was write there as you wrote it. =]

kocoa ( F D ) at 2008-02-05

This poem is just what i was looking for to make me feel better. and for that i thank you for writing something that is so beautiful as this.

jan the Depressed Devil ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-05

Wow... a truly well expressed poem! the best i've ever read! i just loved the way you wrote it.. damn it's so sick! =] AMAZING POEM!

Jessenia Sanchez ( C ) at 2008-02-06

You really do have a passion for writing. I loved it!

Nuwara ( F P C ) at 2008-02-06

Wow simply amazing, great writing.
love it so much.
"Longing puckering lips smile in your direction,
It seems as though this love is a horrible infection,
Blushing red cheeks turn brighter as you come in sight,
The urge to kiss you here and now is a feeling hard to fight."
AMAZING.

Aimie at 2008-02-06

Wow this is so good!
well done!! :D:D

xxxx

Crystal Gaze ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-06

I don't know what to say. Im speechless.
This peice was so well laid out, the flow was amazing, and the word choice great.
You really held my attention throughout the whole piece.

Simply Wonderful.
5/5 -Elly

benjamin at 2008-02-07

Amazing. its just amazing what a person can do when they pour there heart out. i love the last stanza , it shows what the poem is all about . the two loves coming together
simply wonderful 5 out of 5

the miss katelyn ( F C ) at 2008-02-08

Aw..wow that was ah-mazing.
i loved it..keep it up:]

<3katelyn.

BrokenHearted ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-08

Wow, this is the first time ive read your stuff and that was amazing....10/10

Jennifer Dziak ( F P C ) at 2008-02-08

I like the irony.

moonlil ( F P C ) at 2008-02-09

Very nice. I like it very much.

c 0 n f u s e d ( F C D ) at 2008-02-09

This one gotz be in my fav poem ! <3


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