Comments - A Prayer Before Sleeping

sarah at 2005-09-12

Really good.i love it!

Shake down you make me break ( F P ) at 2005-09-12

Omg all of ur poems are so amazing I love them! Keep up the good work.

TreasureTrove at 2005-09-13

Aaahhhh.....The perfect partner...The one thing everyone wishes for...
It's perfect....
*****
Jenn

Jen Fox ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-13

I like this poem...it has a great style to it...I love reading your poems...they are really really good...keep up the awesome work...l8r, jen

Love Fallacy ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-14

You are a very good poet, i love your work. If you don't mind, check out mine and give me your advice

Tammi ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-14

Love it it does not matter if u love a man or woman this is the prayer we al need to pray keep up the good work 5/5

Crystal ( F P C ) at 2005-09-14

OMG...that is so so sweet....that was just amazing...wonderful job..5/5...i loved it. keep writing..
xoxoxo
Crystal

Robyn at 2005-09-14

WOW. Where are there more men like you? :}

wwediva at 2005-09-14

Wow i loved it. it reminds me of sum1.

sarah ( F ) at 2005-09-14

Wow i think that is so amazing.
i love it so much

*Pure_Angel* ( F ) at 2005-09-14

That was excellent. i love your style and that poem was amazing. i love how you express youself in your writing.
-Britney-

Dahna at 2005-09-14

Very sweet and touching poem. I love it.

*~*Gina*~* ( C ) at 2005-09-15

Aww that was so cute. keep up the work!
~Smile Always~
Gina

Crystal at 2005-09-15

Thats really good. i liked it alot. i'll pary that you find that girl someday.

Sweetcheeks at 2005-09-15

This is honestly the best real poem i've ever heard you have an awesome writting ability. it''s sweet and honest and cute.

**DOLL PARTS** ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-15

My boyfriend just left to louisiana and this reminds me of us, awesome poem

jazz at 2005-09-15

I loved it, and i hope you find you prayer girl...kepp writting

rhiannon yau at 2005-09-15

Mathew you sound like the perfect man if only i had someone like you in my life the poem is gr8 keep up the good work x

shelby at 2005-09-15

Thats a really good peom i hope u find her shell be a very lucky girl

rosanne at 2005-09-15

Another awesome poem, Michael. They are always a joy to read.



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