Comments - He died from a brokenheart

Becky at 2005-12-29

Wow, this was really cute I really liked the end with the message to everyone Keep it up good-job

Jenn ( F ) at 2005-12-29

It was really kool i liked it!!

xXxsilentcrierxXx at 2005-12-29

This is sad but really good, keep it up, great job, 5* -becky

disazngurllove ( F C ) at 2005-12-29

I like its so good heheh but kinda sad but still good thanks
marady

disazngurllove ( F C ) at 2005-12-29

5/5

Shayna at 2005-12-29

I love your poem, thanks for writing it, it was so inspiraring, would you mind checking out mine?? --- Yours Truely
Shayna

Amber at 2006-01-03

Wow these poems kinda remind me of my ex bf, wow well keep writing cause i love them

cherelle at 2006-01-18

This is deep real deep. i love i this. keep writing

bek at 2006-01-20

Your right i do love it
it is so good how do you come up with
these things


Kelly Schucker ( F C ) at 2006-01-27

5/5
it was really great
keep writing!

Juliann ( P C ) at 2006-01-28

I love this poem alot. i like poems like this.

Alissa at 2006-02-21

I understand where your coming from! Great POEM!

sezz ( F P C ) at 2007-08-15

Wow i really liked this one! so many good lines, u r really talented

missin him ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-21

Awww...i really felt the hurt from this poem : ( it was written very well keep it up!

ali ( F C ) at 2007-08-21

Awwww 5/5 def
it was soo cute!!! it flows so perfectly and its written with such meaning and its soo easy to relate to. i really liked it, there are so many good expressions in it!!! :)

♥shyann♥ ( F P C ) at 2007-08-23

Another beautiful poem!! its obvious you have talent....and i really like the message you gave out in this poem...you just won a spot in my favourites. im looking forward to reading more!!5/5

broker ( F P C D ) at 2007-09-23

This is soooo sweet and sad all in one!

5/5 Ingrid

Kris ( P C ) at 2007-09-23

WOW!!
It's very good.
I love it, especially the last paragraph.
It is excellent advice.

maggielou at 2007-10-30

As much as i love this its kinda hard to read.

Daniel Patrick ( F P C D ) at 2007-12-23

In some places I thought the flow was off a bit but I still have that trouble too. Excellent poem and very sad. 5/5


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