Comments - But That Time

goran ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-05

Please read and comment on this poem as it mean a lot to me.....

Maddy ( F P C ) at 2006-07-05

This p0em is s0 beautifull written and i w0uld have to agree with y0u, its 0ne 0f y0ur better 0nes! great j0b 0nce again!
l0ve maddy x0ox

Silver J ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-05

Not bad, it took a few lines to get going but the ending was certainly good. I think on the second line it would sound better "no matter if it's sun or rain."
I liked the reference to present and future. Thanks for sharing.

Arcane Blondie ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-05

This was an amazing poem! I read it twice because it really...captivated me. The message it so true and this is definately one of your better poems-- Great write and keep up the good work! 5/5

shela ( F C ) at 2006-07-05

Woooooooooow,
you are giving out hope in this one, I am sure everyone love this poem, It is too great to write some words about it here, I have to email you my feelings about it.
take care.

freshta ( C ) at 2006-07-05

Hahahaha,
this is laugh mixed with tears.
a wonderful poem by the greatest poet.
but just to let you know, If you take over her sleep then she would not mind following you to out of city. right?
i mean i would,lol.
the greatest hopeful poem.

Laura ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-05

Wow this was really well written!

My favorite part was:
In every moment,
There is something new to see.
Today,
While you don't respect my feelings
Tomorrow,
The same feelings may not be.

I like how you structured the lines.
I could really relate to the feeling of this poem. it is happy and sad all mixed into one write. I like how you take us from past to future.

My only change would be this line:
No matter it is sun or rain.

It may read easier if you changed it to something like
No matter if it is sun or rain
or
No matter if it is shine or rain

Just a suggestion but all in all I loved it and it was a very enjoyable and uplifting read!!

×;Nαtαlie;× ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-05

Pretty nice poem.

We have hope for a happy tomorrow
Even if today we live through pain.
[I really liked those lines. They were great!]

It was a pretty good poem. Liked it alot. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.


Poetress*of*FiRe ( F C D ) at 2006-07-05

Nice relaxed poem. great job

Samantha Hollywood ( F C D ) at 2006-07-05

Great job , I really liked the theme and the rhyming / rhythm worked out well too.
Thanks for your comment on my song!
5/5

**Samantha Hollywood

Shawna ( C ) at 2006-07-05

Great Poem!! I will try to check out some more of yours!!

punksunite24 ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-06

I love the flow of this poem. I just kept wanting to read on and on. I love the diction. It was really good. 5/5 keep it up!

§äяаћ ღ ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-06

Good one! Very well written. I thought it was as usual blossomed full of emotion. Keep it up!

Leah20 ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-06

Very nice job. I love the wording, very nice flow!!! Keep it up!

Colby ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-06

Hey goran great poem, loved it! 5/5

Top_Sloth ( F C D ) at 2006-07-06

I honestly do not get why so many people claim this poem to be anything out of the ordinary. I saw nothing outstanding, nice, good, lovely, wonderful, well, or amazing in this poem- things that all these people have said to be present within these lines.

ояdiиаяy ( F P ) at 2006-07-06

Hey.
I love this poem.
It's great.


Nelle ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-06

WOW!! i can see why it's your favorite, i think it's my favorite one that i have read so far today!! it was amazing veryyyyyyy inspiring!!! i loved it...5/5

Tamra at 2006-07-06

Thanks for the comments. Wow. I loved this, flawlessly written. 5/5

julie p at 2006-07-06

Omg......... this is great so much emotion in it.... thinking about a heartbreaker makes you think twice


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