Comments - The Luckiest Guy (part 2)

RoadandtheRadio ( F C D ) at 2006-09-20

Aside from a few things such as complain should be complaint etc, I thought it was a pretty okay poem. It got it's point across though I wish you would have put more emotion into this. Remember show don't tell.

farah ( F P C ) at 2006-09-20

I thought this poem was alot better than the first part because in this poem it describes the debunking perception that the other poem unfurtunatly lacked...it is a very powerful, strong and emotional poem...i loved it..but there is so many unanswered question i have to this poem........

farah ( F P C ) at 2006-09-20

I ment to say emotion and passion rather than perception..which doesn't make any sense..sorry about that..

goran ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-20

Thank you farah, for liking it, and I kind of know what are your questions, there is a big story behind this poem, so i can not write it here.

thank you again,

shela ( F C ) at 2006-09-20

Wow, I dont have enough words to tell you how great is this poem, but in my mind you created many unanswered questions. I like this better than origional one. 5/5

Nelle ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-20

Holy crap. I loved this poem. it was so different then any other love poems i have read recently. well actually. ever. it was absolutely amazing. i enjoyed reading every word of it! great great job

Mr_blueknight"Gene Ross I. ( F C D ) at 2006-09-20

Is she already read this!.. Wow dude a super ultra sad and sweet poem for her , Hope she will read this and the words you use was penetrate my heart it passes through my veins lols and yeah it is absulutely 5/5

Geneross

goran ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-20

You mean if HE read it???
i dont think so cause he dont know me nor i know him,lol

Taylor Lyn ( F C ) at 2006-09-20

Excellent work, I really enjoyed it...now I'm gonna go read part one! hehe...Keep up the good work, looking forward to reading more of your poems!!!

desigirl ( F C D ) at 2006-09-20

As the feelings i feel in this poem, I can see this poem as another hit poem in this site.
I love the way indirectly you are speaking to your competition, but I want to write a small quote here
"THE TRUE LOVE ALWAYS WINS"
so from what I see you are a winner.

I wanna L your V--// ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-20

Omg Goran this is absolutely amazing! I think this is very powerful and great. It was nicely written and the flow was outstanding.

Robert Gardiner ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-20

Sweet and lovely penn, great job!!!

misstress ( F C D ) at 2006-09-21

A very good sequel.truly.
With good lines on it.
It was a good read.
I wonder who's the luckiest guy...

God Bless!


Goth ( F C D ) at 2006-09-21

Very sad!! Alot of heart break in this poem, and felt every second of it.
Have to rate this one a 5/5 for the emotional reality!!)

freshta ( C ) at 2006-09-21

Hmm, it is me again, just like you said your freshta,lol.
Goran i read this like 10 times just to pick up every word from your point of view.
(The angel that we both love)
so you mean you still love a girl who broke your heart and you are sure she dont love you?
(Advise her not to hate me)
why writing for a person that hates me???
what about 100s of ppl that love you?
(finding the reality of my dreams)
this one create many questions, do you still dream about a girl who dont love you???

their were just quoestions i had to ask you but I swear. yes. I SWEAR.lol it made me cry as I can feel the pain. this poem taught me one lesson, nomatter what ppl think of us, no matter how famous we are, if we dont have the person we want in life, then life s all beauty is meaningless, when i feel bad, i feel like crying in the middle of the nite, i turn on my PC and read some of your poems and feel better, but yet i'm wondering what you do when you feel upset, write her another poem. (TRUST ME NO ONE DESERVE YOUR BEAUTIFUL HEART)

*~*~*Crystal Dreams*~*~* ( F C ) at 2006-09-21

WAT A BEAUTIFUL sequel 5/5....goran aap jaysa koi nahi yaar...i loved it...aacha hai..:) i feel wat u have writtin in my heart too.. its a wonderful poem...:) it must mean alot to you..but it means more to me coz it was writtin by YOU..... :) :) :)

tkcare
regards...
sonam

sweet lig ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-21

How so sweet.... very sweet poem! well this is the part two, so i am now interested to read the part one hehe.. well job well done keep it up5/5
god bless!

© shadowspoet ® ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-21

Oh my....goran, what a beautiful penned you potray here...so breathtaking written...yet flowed with beautiufl emotions!

best wishes from west, bert ~

LuvSuxGetDrunk ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-21

Again, i really liked this one too.

Marcus ( F C D ) at 2006-09-21

Very nicely done.......most I would say was already mentioned before


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