Comments - Just Close Your Eyes

Jamie ( D ) at 2007-07-01

Aw that poem was so sweet! i loved it. 5/5!!

SlaveToTheMusic ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-01

Quite a sweet and capturing poem which I belived to be heartfet and deep showing true emotions portrayed nicely. The word choice was simple yet so strong and effective. I loved the flow it was spot on and could not find a flaw throughout this piece. Well done I liked this alot. A great read and Im sure an even better write.
5/5
~mel

Stephanie Naylor ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-01

I thought it was a very sweet and heartfelt poem. and it was very nice through out it and its nice to see what people always say to others to make them feel better, 5/5

Go Orlando ( F C D ) at 2007-07-01

It's very sweet.. A powerful poem.. ^^
Beautifully written,and eye catching.
The flow was great too...
Very nice poem. ^^
5/5

Bluedreams ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-01

Very touching yet so lovely poems you penned here...simply yet flow well within beautiful emotions.....so heartfelt written! awesome!

Goran Rahim ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-02

OMG, dear this was another great great one by you, wow you did this so beautifuly... keep it up dear...

you know each time i tried to comment this poem the system were kicking me out and i had to sign in again, but im glad finally i got it.lol

Escoffier ( P ) at 2007-07-03

Very good writing, I enjoyed reading your poem.

10X BETTER ( C ) at 2007-07-03

Great poem...... good detail! i liked reading it!
=)

please comment sum of my work

Hebe ( F P C ) at 2007-07-03

Such a sweet poem.
Great flow, and emotions.
A pleasure to read.
Take care

Tylor ( P ) at 2007-07-04

Wow.. my favorite poem.. no i think the best poem i have ever read.. good job.. i really love it
-Tylor

Avan ( C ) at 2007-07-04

Wow! i loved tis poem
"I'm waiting for you
In your dreams,
I'll kiss you sweet
It's me you'll see."
tis was my favorite like. good job.

A M B E R R ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-04

Just close your eyes
And go to sleep,
Wherever you are
I'll always be.

That was the perfect stanza to end this poem!
That peice of work was beautiful.
The emotion and love put into this was amazing.
Great Job!

aLaBYu at 2007-07-04

Awwe. just keep it up.
pour ur emotions towards writing poems.

~*Hernandez*~ at 2007-07-05

.. EXTREMELY SWEET NICE JOB

Sugadoo at 2007-07-05

That was SO sweet. I seriously cryd when I read it and so did my co worker. You have a great gift for writing. Keep up the good work.

Sugadoo at 2007-07-05

That was SO sweet. I seriously cryd when I read it and so did my co worker. You have a great gift for writing. Keep up the good work. I so have to add this to my fave.

Hawtee Incorporated ( D ) at 2007-07-06

Very good. so simple but filled with a lot of emotion. i really like it. :)

cj at 2007-07-07

That was such a sweet poem i loved it!!

cj at 2007-07-07

That was such a sweet poem i loved it!!

Sailor ( F P C ) at 2007-08-21

Nice poem.


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