Comments - Almost

xkelsiex ( F C ) at 2007-07-05

I almost went to heaven
"Before I was a saint
We almost painted a masterpiece
Before we learned to paint"

These were my favorite lines.I loved this poem.Great job.
Kelsie

B r o k e n xx ( F C D ) at 2007-07-05

This poem is amazing! I loved the style of it..i cant explain it...like how it was about 'we' and how you ALMOST did this and that...that probably doesnt make sense. lol. But i really liked it. Awesome flow too. Keep it up. Xx Chrissie

Karl Wild AKA GodsGift ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-05

I loved the flow and word choice in this poem it was excellent. I love the meaning behind the poem and I love the way you describe almost, It's like we always want to rush things and we never take the time to really see all we have. Amazing poem 5/5 GG23

Bluedreams ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-05

Awesome penned, though simply but writing well within beautiful emotions........Bert.

Sweet Fragility ( F C D ) at 2007-07-05

I almost fell in love once
You know I almost cried
I was almost born
Before I almost died

My fave stanza ^^

Simple but good. The word choice was good too. Keep up the good work!

NyellMoonlight ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-05

Wow, amazing poem! I like it from the beginning to the end, and every stanza is excellently written, but my absolute favorite is:
-I almost fell in love once
You know I almost cried
I was almost born
Before I almost died-
^breath- taking.
Great job, you're so talented!
5/5 from me

Kara P at 2007-07-05

Awesome, loved it, really interesting, good word choice. Loved it!
You are a talented poet!
:)
Kara

Goran Rahim ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-06

Omg, this almost made me to write another poem,lol.
as always this was another great poem by you. what i love about ur works are they are not just a poem but in each poem you teach ur readers a lesson and it depend on the reader to take advantage of it. this was another great one sir...

Cassandra ( F D ) at 2007-07-06

Purely Amazing.
This 'work-of-art' has incredible style and structure combined with inspirational rhymes. Its Beautiful.
You are truly a poet to look up to.

"I was almost born
Before I almost died"

^^these lines completely blew my mind.

5/5!

NovembeR ( F C D ) at 2007-07-06

Wow man, this is pretty sweet.
i really like the last line, it has a resounding sort of, brainchild effect on things that "almost" were.

good write.

Tom.

Hebe ( F P C ) at 2007-07-06

Great poem.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Take care

FELTON PHILLIPS ( P C ) at 2007-07-09

Your style of writing is clear.concise, beautiful to read and enjoy. Thanks for your contribution to the world of poetry.

Fsams ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-10

Great poem with strong overflow of feelings. 5/5 all the way

On Cupids Bad Side ( F C ) at 2007-07-12

Wow I am speechless. That was excellent, I enjoyed it a lot. Made me want to read some more of your poetry, which were also very good.
Keep up the good work!!

livin in a lonely hell ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-13

Wow this is really creative and great choice of words this is like a song by "bowling for soup" called 'almost' even though its a lot alike u made urs unique good job

laura

SlaveToTheMusic ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-15

I must say this was such a creative beautiful piece of work. I really have no idea how to express how this poem made me feel within my emotions. The line "I almost painted a masterpiece, Before we learned to paint" Really hit my heart so strong and powerful. I must say this was stunning. An elegant piece which was created with simplicity yet had a whole new meaning behind its sweet beauty. Well done on writing this. ~mel

nikki ( F C D ) at 2007-07-16

I have to say you have such a talent with your writing, i loved it, the picture you brought to my mind was so strong. it was so strong and powerful. the flow was great, the structure i loved. 5/5

ImNotPerfect20 ( F C D ) at 2007-07-18

I thought this was really cute.. Short but sweet. I actucally found no fault with this.. Flawless.. Very good.. 5/5

Sandra D ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-18

This is so amazingly beautiful.
i love how everything -almost- happened. you have such a way with words, in three stnzas, this was deeper than a lot of the poems ive read lately.
grea job!
5/5

~Sandra

Shelbz ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-19

Yay this is different from a lot of love poems!!! good job! 5/5


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