Comments - Because You Loved Me

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-09-03

Deana
Beautiful piece. Stuning imagery.
Take Care Cindy

Todd at 2007-10-10

I just thought I would tell you that it is very rare I read anything so happy as this on this site. I like hopeful things. I guess I understand that there is a place for tragedy, but it's so real and often that I much rather read a rarity like this.

This is beautiful.

debbylyn ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-06

Perfect verses of love ....love the ending lines...

An aching heart no longer seeks
Empty arms no longer reach
My mind ,my heart , my soul agree
I am at peace, because you loved me

^ tht's it exactly! peace....found in that one special person....

Panic for me and ill do the same at 2007-11-18

Ohmygosh, that was so good I like looked back to make sure i was reading it right that is an absolutely great poem!!!!!

From the 11 year old poet XD

Panic x

Chris Black at 2008-01-10

Thanks for commenting mine.

i love this one
you're a good poet =]

Healing Spirit tpfka Broker ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-20

An aching heart no longer seeks
Empty arms no longer reach
My mind ,my heart , my soul agree
I am at peace, because you loved me

Deana,

This is my favorite stanza.
Your poem describes very well how the love of a man can turn your whole life around. A very beautiful tribute to love!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

David ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-30

Whoa gosh, now this was a great poem, so much love and affection. you have an unreal amount of talent! bravo!

5/5 David

hadia ( F C D ) at 2008-02-23

Wow.. amazing.
i love the way you use your words.

i dont know why, but this verse is my fav:
"An aching heart no longer seeks
Empty arms no longer reach"


well.. great poem!!

Alexa Eudis ( C ) at 2008-03-03

This is the essence of deep, amazing poetry. nice job!

Enter The Hall of Mirrors ( F C D ) at 2008-03-22

WOw. THis is beautiful. Wonderfully written. It was truly deep and a poem from the heart. 5/5

Kail ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-05

Aw! How wonderful is it to be loved? Well, just read this poem and find out! lol It was so good! I loved it. It was beautiful.

HvN ( F P C D ) at 2008-07-04

Love truly is an amazing thing and this poem says it all :] 5/5 great job!

ELLO MUPET 52194 ( F C ) at 2008-07-09

The title reminded me of the song ceilin deon sang!

nice poem!5/5

JR13 ( F C D ) at 2008-09-06

DAMN THIS POEM IS SOMETHING ELSE I GUESS U CAN SAY I UNDERSTAND WHERE YOU COMING FROM I GOTTA GIVE THIS A 5/5

Aureus Argentum ( F C D ) at 2008-09-08

Beautiful poem. :) I loved it! You did an outstanding job. 5/5

Bri~

Maddi ( P C D ) at 2008-10-14

Incredible, its awesome it has so much illusion!! you should check out some of mine:).... i gave this a five out of five

Deprived from the right to speak ( F C D ) at 2008-10-14

Beautifully penned, breathtakingly amazing piece. I tried to pick a favorite part but I figured out that I love the whole poem.

Thank you for sharing this.

Rodney Kirby ( F C ) at 2009-04-15

I thought, it was beautiufull, very sweet. if you would read and comment on a few of mine, i would love it i will read more of yours.

Robert Gardiner ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-28

Exquisite!!!!

Paul anand singh ( F C ) at 2009-06-01

A beautiful and heartfelt piece superbly penned.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...


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