Comments - Wish upon a star.

Nobodys Hero ( F C D ) at 2008-10-30

This is a really honest and emotion filled poem, your a very talented writter and i think this is one of your best poems iv'e read! The flow waskept well throughout the poem so it was easy and interesting to follow ^^

Beautiful Forever ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-31

Very beautiful poem. The flow was a little shaky, but otherwise it was brilliant. The word usage and concept were completely beautiful. Although it was enjoyable to read, the topic was a little cliche. But still, very wonderful write that deserves a 5/5


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