Comments - Until We Meet Again

Pingu ( F P C D ) at 2010-07-10

What can I say? Your write is deep with emotion, enough to fill the seas. The story told was just beautifully sad. Your flow was right on. I can not critque on anything that you write. Love is beautiful, yet brings us sadness... eh?

Pingu ( F P C D ) at 2010-07-10

What can I say? Your write is deep with emotion, enough to fill the seas. The story told was just beautifully sad. Your flow was right on. I can not critque on anything that you write. Love is beautiful, yet brings us sadness... eh?

Minkus ( F P C D ) at 2010-07-12

This is a great write. My only complaint is that in the last two stanzas, you used "goodbye" at the end of a line two times in quick succession, which kind of stuck out as a bit redundant. The buildup at the very end was excellent. I hope these love poems are being read by whoever they're written to :)

XxFallenxFromxGracexX ( F P C D ) at 2010-10-26

Beautiful pleasure to read
5/5

Teenage Hysterias ( F P ) at 2011-04-25

Oh my gosh.
amazing.
period.

mira ( F P C ) at 2011-05-09

Bravo karl
you really know how to pass your masseg
every time i read this poem i cry its so true
good work


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