Comments - Love is where you are... !

Ashley at 2005-09-18

Over all, very nice.. The rhyming and flowing is good, maybe separate the stanzas might be a suggestion but other then that, I loved it :) once again keep your head up, much love

x_xXericaXx_x ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-18

Aw this was so sweet.....great job...love the flow it was the shit!! 5/5

~*Known_as~Noni ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-18

Very sweet and tender, nice job. Though I'm not a fan of repetitive parts. keep it up

HansRik ( F C D ) at 2005-09-19

I loved this poem. You are truly a great poet. Very fluent, and it really seems like you considered everyone's comments in order to improve your already good work. Keep it up!

shawn hoskins ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-20

I thought it was great it hd a nice flow 5/5

Silver ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-20

Beautiful. I liked all the comparisons they worked well. For some reason the ending seemed to loose the flow of the rest of the poem. This is not good as the ending is the main point of the poem. Overall though, it was good.

Silver ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-20

Oh yeah, you said you'd comment on two of mine now. Please read "There go the flying pigs" and...you can choose another one.

Thanks.

.anji. ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-20

Beautiful.. your very talented

~~babygurl~~09 ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-20

Awwwwwwwwww thts soooo cute. very sweet so many love poems but ur was diff. good 5/5

carolina at 2005-09-20

Hey I like this poem alot it flows nicely too it's really cute
Carolina

xDarkSuicidex ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-21

I'm not much into love poems...but this one I must say, is very very sweet. You're an excellent excellent poet, wonderful job.

Sheena

Geena at 2005-09-26

This poem is excellent, so cute too. loved it 5/5.

ღl*themeuneverseen*l ღ ( F C D ) at 2005-09-29

Very good work! Short sweet and to the point! loved it!

Love
Haily

*ღBeckyღ* ( F C D ) at 2005-10-01

Another good one! 5/5 Loved it! By the way thanks for that spelling correction lol it was supposed to be accept lol
Becky
xoxo

¤.::.~§Gizmo§~.::.~¤ ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-02

I love the emotion of this poem. it was great...it reminds me of two friends i once had, shortie n pico. :) lol their real names are ashley n manuel, but this reminds me of them so much, and all the things we've been thru...and it makes me wish they still loved me! this was amazing, and i hope that some day, someones going to love u as much as u can love them...

this was a great write....

5/5

babygal at 2005-10-02

Such wonderful continuity in this poem...
i also found this poem in poetry .com i see your a member there & they have your poem printed in a book as well
so talented
great !

killcreek at 2005-10-02

Very good flow...


crystal ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-02

Amazing poem! you can feel the love as you read the lines. keep up the great work!
crystal

Tyler Windish ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-03

This is a greatly written poem.. I can tell you must have written many poems
Its truly an amazing poem.. Great poem!

Emma ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-03

I like this alot . keep up the good work. it was good.
Emma5/5


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