Comments - To My Unborn Child...

amanda at 2005-07-14

great loved it


amanda at 2005-07-14

great loved it


LeAnn at 2005-07-14

you are such a good poet....

Chelsi ( F P C ) at 2005-07-14

This is a very touching poem!! I know you will be a great father, if you have followed what you want your son to follow. I hope everything goes well!! Great job!! 5/5

Alex D. ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-14

its good!! check out some of my poems if you get a chanse

bneathxmyxeyesx3 at 2005-07-14

That was the most sensory senteneced affectioate poem I have ever read. The passion and the affection really showed in this miraculous poem. Unbelieveable job!

Nicole at 2005-07-14

He is ganna have the best father in the world....I just wish my son could have a fatehr that caresas much as you do.......

Jade at 2005-07-14

omg this poem is so cute.Your son is going to be lucky to have a great dad like you. I only wish i could have a father like you 2

Jordan at 2005-07-14

that's a really good poem. it's the best feeling in the world to know you brought life into it.

xLoVe HuRtSx ( P C ) at 2005-07-14

amazing matt, this poem shows true love. do u really have a son? if u dont, u sure fooled me. i didnt think any person especially a guy (no offence) could have such passion like that unless its from experience. great job keep writing

Allison ( C D ) at 2005-07-14

Wow, This is an amazingpoem. Congrats if there is a little one on the way. You sound liek you'll be an amazing father, and poet! Great job!

tiffany ( F C ) at 2005-07-14

THAT WAS AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL! IM IN TEARS! YOUR LOVE FOR YOUR UNBORN SON SHOWS THROUGH YOUR WORDS, GREAT JOB! ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! 5!

seanna at 2005-07-14

very good writing and good luck with the baby and everything else

Kiara at 2005-07-14

Oh my gosh that was such an amazing and inspirational poem. I loved it so much. Are you really gonna be a dad? If so I bet you'd be a great one...I totally rate your poem a perfect 10 it's too good for a 5. If u would like you can read sum of my poems too even though they're not as good as yours...lol thanks .... Kiara

Millena at 2005-07-14

That is one of the most touching poems I've ever heard.

Congratulations if you are expecting your son.
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~Britty~Nlove ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-15

omg that was soooo good 5/5 plez r/c mine if you have the time

sinister ( F C ) at 2005-07-15

5/5. excellent job. my dad dies went i was 2 so i never really knew him. reading your poem, i hope he felt the same way bout me as you do bout your son.

samantha at 2005-07-15

wow i love the poem actually i have a website and if u wanna add your poem with YOUR name attached to it i would love it so much.... so please think about it and if you agree please send me your permission, your name, and your poem to bumpitlikethis@hotmail.com and you can view my site its www.bumpitlikethis.piczo.com ...... tell your friends ;)

Willie ( P ) at 2005-07-15

wow

Meggie ( P ) at 2005-07-15

Awwe! That was such a sweet poem! Keep writing and good luck with the baby! Please vote and comment on mine please! I can't wait to read more of your stuff! 5/5


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