Comments - What I've Kept Inside

Danny ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-04

I kno exactly wat you are talking about omg its crazy....k well i broke up with my gf the other day so yea im pretty deppressed too but i kno exactly wat you are feeling becuz i was forced to break up with her and now........shes with someone else.......and i hate it but yea be happy!! everything will be fine eventually lol so yea im sure you are all ready happy again lol i hope you are tho....great poem and i give a 5/5!!!!! good job i loved it

beth ( P ) at 2006-03-05

Thats a really good poem!!! and it doesnt suck! dont worry about that.! keep writing5/5

i am only me at 2006-03-05

I used to feel this way, i like you poem its beautiful and although i no longer feel this way it plays with my emotions, if you feel this way i hope you feel better lovely
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-Beauty- at 2006-03-05

That was s00 sad..i felt that way with my 3X..but it ened happy n0w!!

JeSsIe at 2006-03-05

Oh my gosh! i love this! i totally know what you mean! i just went thru the same thing!!! This was great! i really hope this works out for you!! and if it doesnt work out with this person i hope you find someone new that treats you better!!

Taja at 2006-03-05

Aww that was cute i know just how you feeling im going through something very similar...its gonna be ok!!! :)

I Moved On... ( F C ) at 2006-03-05

Wow it doesnt suck at all so great...

Janelle at 2006-03-06

I really liked this poem, I feel the exact same way about someone I used to love.

an orange daisy ( F D ) at 2006-03-06

"Just friends" sucks. This poem it great! Good job.

lilia ( F P C ) at 2006-03-06

Awwwww!!! that sooo dosnt suck. that was reallyy good...i can totally relate to this. the last stanza was the bestt. anyways if you get a chance please check out my poems. you could prolly relate to mine as well.

lilia ( F P C ) at 2006-03-06

Awwwww!!! that sooo dosnt suck. that was reallyy good...i can totally relate to this. the last stanza was the bestt. anyways if you get a chance please check out my poems. you could prolly relate to mine as well.

alana ( F P C ) at 2006-03-06

Great poem i love it.. i no how you feel.. n its really good! (the poem that is) itreally explains me in so may ways with my ex..


alana ( F P C ) at 2006-03-06

Great poem i love it.. i no how you feel.. n its really good! (the poem that is) itreally explains me in so may ways with my ex..


rar ( F C ) at 2006-03-06

Very good poem sorry for how u feel hope things get better with you

Katz ( F C ) at 2006-03-06

I love it....its so moving

maxine fisher at 2006-03-06

Ive been in the same position. There is nothing worse than to see the person you really do love, loving someone else. great poem

Kelly Murdock ( F C ) at 2006-03-06

I can completely understand what you're going through. I wrote a poem about my situation too. Its called "Thoughtless Glances"...if you could check it out and comment that'd be awesome.

Thanks and great work!

*Kelly*

Trinh at 2006-03-06

OMG..i love ur poem....it describes exactly how i feel rite now...n im like cryin typin dis..xcept hes not goin out w/nebody....we jus broke up..yea..well nice poem..

crystal at 2006-03-06

That was a really good poem

Summer at 2006-03-06

That really relates to what im going threw right now... that is a very awsome poem! keep it up hun.



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