Comments - Love Rains Down

Swati at 2006-05-21

That was beautifully written! I

Meggie33 ( F P C D ) at 2006-05-23

Wow! once again -speechless- it was wonderful, i loved it! i really can say that my stomach is swirling around like crazy, i wish i had somebody out there who would write poems like this about me!

**meggie**

Brigitte ( F P C D ) at 2006-05-23

Thats so sweet! You express your love in words in such a way that it leaves your reader feeling as though they're in love as well! Excellent write, it got better and better with every word!

Silver J ( F P C D ) at 2006-05-23

No offense but the last line was quite cheesy, but it's not that bad if you like that sort of thing.
I liked the idea of running and laughing in the rain, very romantic.
Sweet poem.

Always4You ( F P C D ) at 2006-05-24

Aww that was great lol!! The world needs more guys like you:P

melissa moncayo ( P C ) at 2006-05-28

This is a very lovely poem.

♥;;-Band-Aid-;;♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-06-01

Awww.. I found it very cute. And I thought the flow was right one Dear. Great Poem. (I'm such a sucker for all Love poems. I find them rather amazing) =)

Riffy ( F C D ) at 2006-06-02

Wow, this was so beautiful!
Once again, I love the last stanza, so sweet!
:D Riffy xx.

psYcHo_w/a_razorblade ( F P C ) at 2006-06-06

I love it. its so sweet!!! lol, its cute. keep writing and take care.

PsYcHo

Jennifer ( F P C ) at 2006-06-11

That one is my favorite. You are really good.
Jennifer


§äяаћ ღ ( F P C D ) at 2006-06-11

Aww that was great and really romantic. It got me thinking and wishing about a lot of things. I love to read your poems, they are always interesting and full of emotion. I am so glad I took the chance to stumble upon your writes. keep it up! 5/5

dee ( F C ) at 2006-06-13

I just read quite a few of your poems.. this ones my favourite. youre an amazing writer.. im actually speechless.
dee

...mia... ( F P C ) at 2006-06-14

Beautiful, wonderous, lovely, You really are an acomplished writer my only hope is that one day I may light a match in comparison to your fire :D

Han84 ( F P C D ) at 2006-06-28

Hey
awwwwww me really like this!
its so sweet! kinda of many girls day dream tht wood happen believe it or not!

awww well done! xhanx

Danielle ( C D ) at 2006-07-10

Beautiful! absolutly beautiful!

Chris ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-12

You have some of the greatest writings ive seen in a while
you word your poems so great they seem to be very true too, in the thoughts.

great job

5/5

God Bless


-chris

Nelle ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-20

Omg Darien. all of your love poems are just amazing! I would love to have a guy like you. you are great, and this one, this one was reallly really sweet and cute and full of love, and ahh i just absolutely loved it =) definetly 5/5

xDarkSuicidex ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-22

I see her from my window,
and can't help but think.
What if she were my girl?
My heart would sink.

I disliked this part. I'm not sure why, but I think you could have done better.

called for a rainy day.

I believe that should have been rain... maybe not.

And I -loved- the last three stanzas. They were strong, amazing, beautifully said, and wonderfully written. A great ending to a poem is the best thing for a poem. It saved your poem from being a lower rating, actually. =)

And I wanted to say again, you're an amazing writer. I appologize for the difficulties we've had. Perhaps we could make amends. Take Care.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

X These Tears Fall Down Like Rai ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-24

Awwwww!!!!!!! This Was A Really Cute Poem!!! I Actually Think This One Is My Fav! Amazing!!!! 5/5 Love,
Steph

xDarkSuicidex ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-16

Awww that's so sweet.. and the ending was wonderful.. Simply a great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5


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