Comments - Every Season

babiiGurl ( P ) at 2006-07-14

Wow that was awsum. a beautiful portrayal of pain. 5/5

Ana at 2006-07-14

I like this poem it had a nice meaning good job...

Melissa S. Masucci ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-21

So many people negatively critique short poems just because they're short. I appreciate short poems because the ability to say so much in so few words is a skill that not many possess. This is fantastic, by the way.

Used2BYours at 2006-07-21

This poem is the best out of all ur poems i read. Maybe thatz because its one i can actually relate to...

xDarkSuicidex ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-23

Oh my god...

That is the best love poem I've ever written. It's exactly what happens when I try to write a love poem. I try but I write one line and freeze... Great job!

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

ShhhhItsASecret© ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-24

Awww, That's really good. Sadish =/ But still good. It was a bit simple, but it was still nonetheless very good. I like the way you wrote it. The pen talking to you.. Very original. And as many others have stated, Those last two lines were great! Keep up the good work :)

~BJ~

loretta Taylor ( F P C ) at 2006-07-29

Beautiful poem. Ithink you are an amazing writer. 5/5 and thank u for the nice comments

lexie ( P C D ) at 2006-08-01

That was really sad.and wonderful all at the same time.and i know how that feels.youre very talented also:D
--lexie

lexie ( P C D ) at 2006-08-01

That was really sad.and wonderful all at the same time.and i know how that feels.youre very talented also:D
--lexie

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-02

I can relate to this one passion is like the storm that moves beyond reason

рортаят™ ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-03

Ohhh. I like this one. It's realyl short though. But I get what you are talking about.

♀Paper♀ ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-07

I really enojoy your poetry. i'm left speachless. lol good job :D

~Terra

PS. ima add you to ma favorites

Ashley at 2006-08-11

Your one of the best guy poets i kno

myshiningstar14 ( F P C ) at 2006-08-12

Lil detial..need more...but this was better. the beat was off..but your sharing your heart and as a writer thats the key point. try not rhyming let it flow...poems liek that are always deeper.

Lissa

Katrina Boblin ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-15

Aw! I like this poem!
It's short and sweet and i liked the lines

"Like the colors of the leaves
She changes every season."
Good job on this one actually!
I usually try to give advice,
but its a short poem,
and theres nothing to correct really haha

♥ Jєѕѕу ♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-16

Awh, this was quite good. The flow was a little off as some lines were longer than others. The descriptions were interesting though, I liked how you made the pen talk and the metaphor of her changing like the seasons.. Nice job 5/5

marie at 2006-08-18

This touched me somewhere inside, im not embarased to say, thank you.

---AL--- ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-23

This poem was okay, I found it more of a quote than a poem mind you, and the ending was really the only thing that stood out. Last three lines we're clever and artistic, I think it would of been nice to have a flow or rhythm for the poem to accompany the powerful ending.

Sarah at 2006-08-25

Very heartfelt. that's just how some girls are. 5/5

Tragic Reason ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-27

Wow, this one is awesome too. I love your poetry, even though it's mostly short...:) "keep up the good work" lol Thanks for the comments on my poetry.


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