Comments - But That Time

ShadowedPhoenix ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-06

Hey great poem! Don't worry about people who down vote it and act all pathetic, seriously pity them- they must have very boring, empty and resentful lives! Anyways I enjoyed this poem and rated 5

LOVED these lines lol they are awesome

Today,
While you don't respect my feelings
Tomorrow,
The same feelings may not be.

goran ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-06

Thank you all

desigirl ( F C D ) at 2006-07-06

A perfect poem, but i will not give you 5/5 cause you made me cry again.
It is truly the best poem ever, big hope for hopeless ppl. I love it.

TaperedDreams ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-06

Great work, i really liked the poem and the message, you shouldnt have to wait around for this person to realise how great you are.

Good job, keep it up.

--Steph

*Chelsey-Lynn* ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-07

In every moment,
There is something new to see.
^^ I liked those lines most because its really true and I agree with you!!!
Really enjoyed reading a beautiful poem like this and definatley will vote a five!!



x123Mary ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-07

ITs great.. but you already know that

Danielle ( C D ) at 2006-07-07

Very good!
i like the emotion with words, you seemed to make such weak words so strong with so much empathy!
keep it up!

May ( F P C ) at 2006-07-07

Great poem! Very well written!
-May

Just Wishes ( F C ) at 2006-07-08

A sense of threat there . Good job.

cheers,
Wishy

Lady Vengeance ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-09

I really enjoyed the beginning a lot. i found it rhymed quite well and had a calm, loving, but lost feel to it. it uses a simple structure but you managed to get it to reach deep inside me and make me feel as if i were the one writing it and experiencing these feelings.

The second half however lost me a little. it made sense when looked at as a technicality but i failed to understand its relevance to the rest of the poem so far.

The most interesting thing about the second half however was that even thouhg i saw no obvious relevance, it still made me feel the lost love, "its ovre" emoitons. like, i dunno how, but this poem draws me in and i feel it's emotions as if it were my story. This is absolutely incredible. well done. congratulations. and magnificent poem overall.

-Suzie

♥ iNviSibLe 2 u ♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-09

Lovely poem, nice flow and real emotion xxALLYxx

NannO ( F C D ) at 2006-07-09

Wow.. i loved it.. u didnt space out the stanzas, but its more beautiful that way coz it desplays continuity and it complements the theme of the poem.. lol..
its kinda short, but u managed to say evrything u had to say in it.. interestinf rhyme scheme, and gr8 flow..
its also self-esteemed, esp in the last lines.. i mean that it striked me as proud, the good kind.. like, ur in a relationship and two hearts, two minds becomes one, but u still retain ur individuality, and ur self-esteem is important and wont allow u to get hurt by someone who isnt giving u anything in return
(did i get that ryt??) well, thats wat i understood by the end of the poem..
just loved it
gr8 job
keep it up
take care
NannO

Nelle ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-10

Well, this is also my favorite poem that you have written, it was great..it was different in a way, i cant really tell you why, b/c im not to sure but something about it touched me stronger then i thought it would! it was great!

Mr_blueknight ( F C D ) at 2006-07-11

Yeah this is great i think you made this one when your leaving the irao because of war right and you left the girl ...

hope you dont mind
but great poem ....

Chris ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-11

I think this is reallly reallly really GOOD
You have a great talent.
I like how some of the lines rhyme and some dont.
Mix it up ..good writing.
5/5

God Bless

-chris

lisa ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-11

Hmm...i liked this...it kinda made me think...it's really...interesting...excellent job...keep up the good work...
~*~lisa~*~
^.^

lisa ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-11

Sorry...stupid computer won't let me vote...
=(

† Vladimira Rose Styx † ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-12

Well done indeed, nicely thought out.

babiiGurl ( P ) at 2006-07-14

Hey, great poem, im gonna go check out a few more of yours. thanx for the comment on mine =]

Ana at 2006-07-14

This is a great poem also had great meaning and it was also very sad but i loved it


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