Comments - Forever's End

Jenn ( P ) at 2006-07-31

Wow I truley loved this poem, espically becuase it says that you two fell in love on new years eve, and that is the night that the love of my life, told me he first loved me. Very very cute poem and very true

Kylie at 2006-08-01

I love that poem! Excellent work!!!!

ieshia at 2006-08-01

I loved this poem!! it was adorable!..kinda gave me some hope lol...

goran ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-01

Wow, it i a great poem with indeed emotion. I like the way you wrote it from the first, then future. it is really a nice poem, great job

Arcane Blondie ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-01

Great poem! I love how it is like a timeline---My favorite part is the end, especially the last line;;;The flow is flawless, but in my opinion the rhyme is a little much;kind of overbearing--But that's just one opinion-The emotion in this poem is very clear and strongly put---Great write! I love your love poems =-)

5/5 Keep it up-

priscilla at 2006-08-01

This poem is absolutely beautiful...it reminded me of "The Notebook".

Kirsty palmer ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-01

Awwah! how sweet, a great love poem, writen beuatifuly! this poem was heartfelt, and very inspriational..keep it up..great write 5/5...please read and comment on some of my poems, thanks. Kirsty palmer xx

darkkitten ( P ) at 2006-08-02

Wow! It almost made me cry;)

oceandeep at 2006-08-02

Woooooooooooooooooow dear


wat a wonderful poem
it is so so so coooool
i love it

nice using of the words
nice flow too

i like it sooooo much

1000,000/100

no doubt

keep it up dear


Bitt3rSw33t ( C D ) at 2006-08-02

Amazing poem and beautiful transactions...pravo 5/5

♥Bloody Wrists♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-02

Awww this is really good. i defiantly like this a lot. amazing work.

chica poética ( F C ) at 2006-08-03

I LOVE this poem it is SOOOO good. you are a very good writer. keep up the good work. This poem made me cry. it was so good 5/5.

Jasmyn ( F P C ) at 2006-08-03

This was good...

tabby ( F C D ) at 2006-08-03

Wow this is very good i love it. I like your rhyme scheme too. Your an excellent writer and i will be reading more.

tabby

Bridgette ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-09

Aww.. that almost made me cry! It's so sweet. It told a very beautiful story and the second to last stanza was my favorite. And I also liked the way that you ended it. Very good job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

рортаят™ ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-10

Awh that was a very sweet poem. I loved the flow and structure of it.

"Grandparents we became as we grew old
And it seems like time had taken its toll
Our storybook ending will soon be told.
You were my love, wife, my best friend
We know death is just around the bend
But together we will face forever's end."

My favorite part. Beautifully wirtten. :]

jessel jane ( P ) at 2006-08-25

You're having a very nice perspective and hope on your future which is really good.

congratulations.


I wanna L your V--// ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-29

Wowwowow. Amazing I have to say this was lovely, and in a happy kinda way brought tears to my eyes.

"Grandparents we became as we grew old
And it seems like time had taken its toll
Our storybook ending will soon be told.
You were my love, wife, my best friend
We know death is just around the bend
But together we will face forever's end. "

It was a strong poem, and you ended it so well. :]

♥LuvSuxGetDrunk♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-10-18

Awwwh this was so very sweet. Another favourite.


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