Comments - I Never Will Forget You (Extremely Long)

~Patiently Waiting~ ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-27

I'm in awe. I cant explain it. To come up with that, to write it, to explain it so well would have been so hard. But to make it rhyme? To make it sound so good? I dont know how you did it. That was insane. I've given poems 5/5 before, but now I regret that. Your poem made good poems seem poor. That was awesome. I read it all the way through. I realised it was long, I hesitated at first. But it was worth it. I dont know what else to say. If I could give it more, I would, But 5/5 will have to do. Keep it up, that was insane.

Bryan ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-31

Stephen, this is by far the longest anything ive ever read. i usually dont have the patience to read anything ove 50 lines, it actually took me 2 and a half days to read. but after reading it i found that it is also the best poem i have yet to read. i love the way you inserted questions and how the poem is like a story that rhymes beautifully, one thing i found that i think you should correct, capitalizing the beginning of every stanza, inserting commas where needed, and maybe making this 3 seperate poems, but overall this is a perfect 5/5!!! perhaps the best on this site!!!!

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~Princess Disaster [♥] ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-01

Stephen, when I first looked at this, I thought that this was going to be a long, drawn out poem. But, then when I began to read it, I didn't want to stop. The story, the words, the meaning, the flow, the rhyme, everything kept me glued to the screen, grasping at the next stanza. This poem was amazing! It is a quick read and it has such a story behind it. I hope for your sake that this isn't true, but if it is, you have written a beautiful piece. It touched my heart, and almost brought a tear to my eye. Great job!!!! *100000/5* if I could

Take care!
~*`Ciao`*~

::TheFireInMyEyes:: ( F C D ) at 2007-02-01

I absolutely love this poem. Thank you for asking me to read this one!! As long as it was I had to read it twice. So much emotion... it's a very powerful piece. 5/5


Marcella

Ashleigh Skye ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-01

Wow this poem was amazing, at first I thought it was going to be about how someone really missed their ex but it turns out I wasn't so wrong after all. The beginngin had me hooked to find out what would happen next and then the more I got into it the more I realized that it probably wouldn't be what I thought. I am very sorry that you had to go through that, that is not something I would wish on anyone, try and stay strong, and know that it wasn't your fault. There was nothing you could have done to help him. Thanx for sharing this with us, and if that is the letter that you got I am very sorry. ANd the fact that you added it to the poem made it 100% more emotional. amazing. 5/5

Silver J ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-01

Wow....that's got to be the longest poem I've ever read.
Honestly though, I'm sorry but I did get a bit bored by the 20th stanza. I just personally don't like long poems, I like ones that are to the point in a few stanzas, sometimes they have more meaning.
I'm impressed how you managed to keep the story going for so long without wandering off the subject, that was well done.
Again being honest, there were several examples of forced rhyme, but I guess with all those stanzas its hard not to. I didn't understand why you used the last two lines of every stanza in brackets, it just didn't seem necessary.
Sad, emotional and lengthy poem...I think I need a rest now...lol Thanks for sharing.

∫Bëløveđ∫ ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-02

This one... was awesome!

My condolensces (sp)... hope everything's getting better...

This 1 is so sad... hope he RIP

Rachel ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-02

This is the longest poem I ever read! The good thing is that you kept my attention. I hope this is not based on a true story and if so I am very sorry for your loss. Nice job!

Kelsey ( F P C ) at 2007-02-04

Wow, this was an amazing poem. It was so sad though. Many people I know and love have taken their life so I have a level of understanding. Because it really does hurt and confuse. I gave this poem a 5. Good work.

~K3!$3Y~

*Isolde* ( F C D ) at 2007-02-06

Wow that is one long poem...5/5 it was really good though...keep it up..I wonder how long it took to write this..

Kasie ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-07

Wow, It WAS long, but it is a great piece of poetry. It's one of the best I've read so far. I could feel the pain and frustration. Keep up the good work. 5/5 keep writing and i'll keep reading

InvisibleGurl ( F C D ) at 2007-02-07

Hey,
That was a sad poem.
Really beautiful.
Sorry to have that happen to you.
Keep strong.


Shirlz
xx

starsnsmiles ( D ) at 2007-02-07

That was one long poem...and yet, at the same time...it didn't feel that long, because it had me hooked, from the first stanza.

It was sad..but good. Very good. I loved the way you put the 3rd and 4th lines of each stanza in brackets. I don't know why, but it just...worked.

Well done

Tara-Kay ( F C D ) at 2007-02-17

Mmm, i liked it, it was a little long for my taste and that rocked the flow a little.
i still thought it was good though and i did enjoy it.
well done
xx

~*Who Cares?*~ ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-25

Wow i didn't see that u asked to r/r/c this until today, so most appologize. anyway, WOW...great. yes, it waqs extremely long, but it was worth the time to read it. loved the emotion and everything. great job. 5/5

princesrainbow at 2007-02-28

Hey!! it was nice and long i rated it 5/5
well u desrve it...

princesrainbow at 2007-02-28

Hey!! it was nice and long i rated it 5/5
well u desrve it...

Shattered Heart♥ ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-01

Oh my. wow this was defiantly really long, i didn't think i would ever get to the end! lol. but wow. you really wrote this from your heart i can tell. it was so wonderful. sad, but filled with so much emotion and it was really deep. also some of the stanza's rhymed and others didn't, but it was still good!probably one of the best poems you've ever written. amazing job on it! keep on writing! 5/5

~Kristina

Jonda Beth ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-01

OMG...i loved it...it trully rached into my heart...it might be long...but it was worth the time...great..

~The Bleeding Tears Of A Band Ge ( F P C ) at 2007-03-03

Thi is such a beautiful poem..i loved it so much iwas in tears. You are a true souled poet and you deserve every vote and comment you get


please do keep writeing i would love to read more

Love always!
~shannon~


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