Comments - Is forever just a word?

Erin at 2007-01-15

I could not agree more... well said.

~PuRe_IlLuSiOn~ ( C D ) at 2007-01-16

I liked this one a lot...and i've know what you mean in this poem what we want sometimes doesnt go the way we want them to be... keep up the great work... 5/5...thank you... :)

Jasmine ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-18

So true, all of what you said. once again, great work. you speak so honestly of things that everyone thinks.

Jwei at 2007-01-22

This is amazing..if you dont mind, did sum1 break up with you?

Darien ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-23

So.. I was sort of hoping I didn't have to read another one of your love poems because they bring back bad memories that were once good. If you know what I mean.. but I guess you have an inspired heart, one I once had. Keep it alive man. Keep writing too.

Mannosa at 2007-02-01

Nicely said...
I agree with u somehow!

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-03

How sad. Love can be so painful for some. You have expressed this vert well. Excellent job on your poem. Take Care Cindy

Jenni ( F C D ) at 2007-02-23

I voted a 5 for this poem because I have never read a poem where someone used so many different words that rhyme with forever. Everyone always writes the cliche'd ones. I loved the poem overall, it had a very strong tone to it.
wonderful write once again.

Afraid of the Dark ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-26

Really this is a play on words. . . emotional words. . .It works so well because the reader undoubtly (sp?) is sitting there thinking "soo true"

Lovely
laura
x

::TheFireInMyEyes:: ( F C D ) at 2007-02-27

Man, I was all happy with these wonderful love poems you write and this one crapped on my happy haha. Besides that, this is so well written with a flow of perfection. 5/5

marcella

~We Hate Players~ ( C ) at 2007-03-06

This is great!! i know how u feel!!

~shanny~

travisinabottle ( F D ) at 2007-04-02

A lot of meaning in this poem. You've expressed yourself well. But why so pessimistic? Love can last forever, if you care enough.

-Travis[InABottle]

Live WeLL ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-24

Fooled by seven letters,
If not "love you" then "forever",
I'd believe in forever better,
If it actually meant never.

That is a perfect stanza. Great poem. Enough said. =]

playful*plaze* ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-06

Good poem

Used n Confussed at 2007-11-16

An amazing poem!
I really like this!
xxxx

minh at 2008-03-31

Awe... i liked this poem. I hope it is forever though. Great work 5\5

Sara ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-26

So I don't believe in forever,
Because it's just a word

i think this has changed now hasnt it baby :P... but nonetheless i loved it because i didnt believe in forever either until now :P... 5/5 great job

i lovee you <3


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