Comments - The Luckiest Guy (PART 4)

Poetess Call Me Glen-Duh! ( F C D ) at 2006-12-29

And of course I HAD to read the other 3 parts to this. Need I say they were all amazing! Such hopeless love it seems...that's what I like about them! heh.

Just one small thing: this stanza

"I was wrong, thinking
There were hidden love in her eyes.
True, there were love,
But for you, with no lies."

Should be..."there -was- hidden love in her eyes..." and "True, there -was-....". Then it's perfect! =] Oh, and I just loved the ending...
"Yet the reason for my luckiness,
With no one I shall share." Perfect touch. I loved this poem. [All 3 of them!] Keep writing!!

-` Poetess



debbylyn ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-29

I read the whole series of poems and they fit together perfectly. You move along in the grieving process ending finally with acceptance. I love all your poems and think you have great talent whatever you write! 5/5

bon ( P ) at 2006-12-31

Wow, i liked this poem..and i know how it feels. Great job..looking forward to reading more of your writing.


Tainted Beauty* ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-03

Wow, what a way to end the series, this was amazing. It's good that you could move on, and to capture it in such beautiful words, you really have talent. I loved this series of poems.

--Steph

~*Perfect Chaos*~ ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-06

All your pieces were great!! You have some HUGE talent there!! I mean words can't express how great these poems were. However, I think my favorite part was all the emotion you put into them, and the message behind it. It was wonderfully written, and if I could I would sooo give you more than a 5/5!! Keep up the awesome work and don't ever stop writing!! I love all your work!!! It's a masterpiece!!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

~*Perfect Chaos*~ ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-06

All your pieces were great!! You have some HUGE talent there!! I mean words can't express how great these poems were. However, I think my favorite part was all the emotion you put into them, and the message behind it. It was wonderfully written, and if I could I would sooo give you more than a 5/5!! Keep up the awesome work and don't ever stop writing!! I love all your work!!! It's a masterpiece!!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

Rocky ( F C D ) at 2007-01-16

I read all 4 parts and each grew on the ones before it. it was a beautiful poem good work

awww ( F C D ) at 2007-02-13

Hey goran... i've read, commented and voted on this poem before... i couldnt see your other poems so i might as well just comment here... still love this... an excellent ending... btw got a new poem... pls tell me what you think of it^_^

~angel~

David ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-19

This is the best of the series. i loved them all but this is my favourite.

great way of showing how great you write. clap clap!

5/5 David

Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-26

I liked it nice job!!

in.need.of.a.lucky.charm ( F P C ) at 2007-02-28

Wow, that ended differently as i expected which is refreshing. its ended with such contentment and mystery. i loved all parts. thank you

much love and many kisses,
bex

Dark Demise ( F C D ) at 2007-03-01

Love it, very nice, Very deep, Great rhimeing everything bout it was just great, 5/5,

Amber at 2007-03-18

After reading all the parts to this poem. It was amazing, not only the final part but all three. It had alot of emotion in it. Im glad to get the final part.

Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-25

Wow...This poem was amazing!! I don't even know what words to choose for how much I loved this poem your amazing...5/5

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-12

Very good poem, nice work I really enjoyed it.

PS. Plz rate and comment on my poems and I'll return the favour.

Ashleigh Skye ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-19

Hmm this one was interesting not quite as good as the others (im sorry I cannot tell you why) I'm guessing it just didn't speak to me as much as the other did.. but I still really liked it. I love how all these poems are related yet they never seem like you are bored with the subject or anything.. nice work.

Delie ( C D ) at 2007-05-19

Awwe don't worry...one day you'll be the luckiest man on earth ;D

Jade ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-04

This poem is so heartbreaking, I mean so far all of them have, but this was just giving up and accepting something you may never want to accept. And acceptance is something everyone has to do at some point but never wants to. You are one amazing writer

xo kisses xo ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-14

Omg...this one is soooo sad. it almost made me cry. i can totally relate to this poem. i did this exact thing (execept a guy of course)

Alex ( F C D ) at 2007-06-16

"She was yours from the start,
But my heart was wild.
Crying for no reason,
Like a new born child."

That was beautiful.

~*Alex*~


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