Comments - Killed me With a Fantasy

xThatxBoyxIsxBeautifulx ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-06

Okay, my favorite out of all the ones I've read so far. Such great use of words, very powerful, and ended very well. I really like the title, it fits the poem well. God Bless 5/5
<3tay(^_^)
4/6

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-08

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Goran Rahim ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-08

I think everyone else said all the things i wanted to say aabout this poem, so all i will say is i agree with them
exellent poem as always.

Sky ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-29

As I read this poem I saw the words I couldn't find when she broke up with me. I want to cry....this is amazing.

dawn green ( F C ) at 2007-05-31

Wow! bravo! very good write! keep up the good work! now i have to read all of them!
god bless

Tormented ( F C D ) at 2007-06-06

I break apart with every word.
Divert your eyes so YOU aren't hurt.
Don't care for me, I will be fine...
(There goes my "Once upon a time...")

^bloody Awesome stanza!
Awesome Poem!
Loved it!
Nice flow
Nice Vocab
One of the best i've read so far!
Really,Awesome poem
Great work
Keep it up

Keep Smiling.

XHeartsxGoNeXFatEsXWOnXXXSkYEXx ( F P C ) at 2007-07-24

Wow!!!! thats.... an amazing poem! my fav part wuz this:
I'm losing air, it's hard to breathe;
The water's creeping up on me.
Each breath I take may be my last...
(I'm going down... I'm sinking fast.)

idk why but ya...o.o a poem like this should beh published in a book 1 day...n.n great job!!! keep it up and im putting this in meh favs!!! once again, great job!!!
~*~Skye~*~

Adriana ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-28

This is the BEST poem ever to me!
i love it
great job!

Sarah Ann ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-24

The most beautiful heartbreaking poem I've read in a long time.

YouHaveMyxxHeart ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-26

You're my hero, senor. =]
beautifully executed. I'm in awe!


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