Comments - The Perfect Guy

Stephanie Scherder at 2007-04-21

I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM...I THOUGHT I FOUND THE PERFECT GUY BUT TURNS OUT I DIDN'T...LOOKS LIKE YOU HAVE...IT MAKES PEOPLE LIKE ME FEEL LIKE THERES HOPE....CANT WAIT TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WRITING IN THE FUTURE.....

Vonnie McHugh ( F P C ) at 2007-04-22

This was lovely thanks for sharing it

Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-22

Beautifull written I loved the imagery and the rhyme was good and didn't seemed forced at all which is sometimes hard to do...I think you did a fantastic job nicely written!

TuxedoBlack ( F P C ) at 2007-04-23

I liked it. Your creativity is really good. This poem had a lot of things that set it aside from other poems, with generic lines and descriptions. You really used words well to describe how you feel and what you want. :)5/5 I liked it :)

Startle Me ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-23

I gave it a four out of five.
The wording's great
Grammar was great as well.
It just seemed a bit forced.
Like you didn't know what else to say
So you just kind of babbled.
But all in all.
Pretty darned good, yo :]

myshiningstar14 ( F P C ) at 2007-04-23

Thats beautiful..absolutly amazing. love your wordage and the emotion great job.

melissa

Sole ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-26

Really passionate and beautiful piece of poetry. Incredibly well written, I loved reading through it. Amazing.

Sole. x

IdTakeABulletForYou ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-06

Skin so soft caress my body = Skin so soft caresses my body

touch thats = touch that's

long black eyelashes raise to the blue skies = that line makes it seem as if you are talking about a girl... (just to let you know)

Other than that, the flow of the poem was beautiful, and your word choice is outstanding. Good job m'dear, much better than the last. I'm glad that you have found the one.

5/5
~Stephen White

Delie ( C D ) at 2007-06-08

Ohhn.
i like how the whole poems is written to lead up to that one last line.
it's awesome and i wish youz all the bestest. ;)

ctmskh ( F P ) at 2007-08-04

Nice choice of words. the poem flows smoothly and shows good emotion. keep it up.. 5/5

ctmskh

mohamad aref ( F C ) at 2007-10-24

Your poems are really awsome

InvisiblyBroken15 ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-10

Love the ending to this poem... very nice.

from beggining to end it was amazing.i give you a 5/5.

keep it up! =]

LiisaMariie143 ( P C ) at 2008-04-10

Goshh you have really good love poemsss. i like them alott. good job.

Lost and Confused ( F P C D ) at 2008-09-13

Very enticing poem. I'm not into guys, but if I was... that would be excellent. The way you make the reader see your vision is extraordinary. I was completely lost in the amazing write. Good flow, great word usage, and the concept was beautiful... 5/5


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