Comments - Fairytale love

Maranda at 2007-05-31

WOW very good job. Keep up the good work.
5/5

brandi at 2007-05-31

I love this poem! omg.. your such a good poet.. i love the rhymes and just the whole poem.. good job!

J a n e ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-03

Great ending and I like the "should have read the signs in lonely town." Sad but humorous, I guess that makes it a form of dark humor. Yep. The ending is great--the last two lines of the last stanza stand out. Hi 5 for originality!

5/5

*Charisma* ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-02

LOVED the last line! That was an amazing ending! I love your abab rhyme scheme. I always find it's a slight challenge but can make for a great poem! I really enjoyed this!
Charisma*

xXx Jenni xXx ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-12

I frikken love this...your work never ceases to impress me...
Every line of this is very intense and hardhitting, and I loved the ending line, I thought it was very hardhitting.
I enjoyed the depth and emotion you put into this, it is very clearly sensed by the reader.

Sara ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-23

I gave up my entire world for you,
While you promised to do the same,
It was fairytale love, we tried to pursue,
Now your saying someone else's name.

^^ woww great way to start off the poemm! i loved thiss soo much.. you are such an amazing poett.. the flow was amazingg, and so were the actual wordds..5/5 from me

Love Fallacy ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-05

Great job on the write. I really enjoyed it and could really see where you are coming from. Nice job and keep up the good work. If you could check out some of my work. I really think you would enjoy it. Thank you

playful*plaze* ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-06

Really god poem

SeXiSaMi ( F D ) at 2007-08-09

"You talk your way back into my heart,
Expecting acceptance for all your deceit,
I once felt the sorrow when we were apart,
Now being without you makes me complete."

i didnt really expect the ending to be like that.. but its like a reality check to people, you dont always get what you want, and we are better off with certain people in our lives its just the matter of accepting it.. i loved this poem, excellent job!
5/5

Emily at 2007-08-29

I really like this poem.
It kinda makes you feel a tad of sorrow,
with a pinch of hope.
Nicely done.

Leiann at 2007-10-15

This poem...was jus woahh i mean seriusly thats exactly how i feel since my break up and the last stanza with the complete without the other person part is what im aiming to feel...tha poem was jus gr8 and rele well written

kalia at 2007-10-23

I LOVE U LOL. NAW FOR REAL YOU GOT TALENT. HIT BE BACK BUT BEFORE U DO READ ONE OF MY POEMS. THE NAME IS KALIA.


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