Comments - Step into the emptiness

Marc Ortiz ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-31

I love the opening stanza in the poem.. It really grabs the reader's attention. It flowed nicely too, well done.

Cella Bella ( F C D ) at 2007-08-26

You have an amazing way with words. This is just absolutely wonderful. I was captivated from begining to end. Excellent piece!! 5/5

marcella

Chibi Link at 2007-09-04

This is the most beautiful thing i have ever read.
every word just falls into place, masterful.
5/5


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